DUNE!

So Mrs. Vasicek and I saw the new Dune movie in theaters last weekend, and let me just say, it was awesome in every sense of the word!

Speaking as someone who’s read the novel three times and fervently believes it to be the most perfect science fiction book ever written, this movie did not disappoint. Not only is it the best movie adaptation of the book, hands down, but it may be the best adaptation that it’s possible to make of the book. Denis Villeneuve has done for Dune what Peter Jackson did for Lord of the Rings. It’s incredible.

With all of that said, I’m not sure if the movie would make much sense to anyone who hasn’t already read the book first. Dune is really a story within a story within a story, and while the movie captures that aspect quite well, it also touches very, very lightly on the outlying stories, which could be confusing for someone who isn’t already familiar with the novel. Even in my first read, I didn’t fully appreciate the complexity: it took two rereads before I began to grasp the full significance of all of the moving parts.

At its heart, Dune is about the struggle of Paul Atreides (the Chosen One) to push back against his destiny, because he knows that his success will be far more devastating, for him and for the galaxy, than his failure. In that, it’s a brilliant subversion (in the truest sense) of the hero cycle. But all of that takes place within the story of the Bene Gesserit and their quest to create the Kwisatz Haderach, a super-human who can see the past, present, and future all at once. But the Bene Gesserit scheming is all happening within the political intrigue of the Great Houses and the Imperium, specifically with the feud between House Atreides (which presents the greatest threat to the emperor) and House Harkonnen—and all three stories converge on the planet Arrakis, amidst the struggle of the Fremen to terraform their desert world into a lush, green paradise when all of the powers of the galaxy want to exploit it for the spice that is so important for interstellar space travel.

For someone who is already familiar with all of that from the book, the movie hits on all of those nested stories perfectly, without getting bogged down or missing the most important story of all: Paul’s internal struggle with his own destiny. But for someone who is new to all of that, the movie might be really confusing. It will be really interesting to hear what my Dad thinks of it, because he’s never read the book and he plans to stream the movie over Thanksgiving break. I’ll report back when I hear his reaction.

Some people are criticizing the movie for ending at the wrong place, but I actually think it ended at the exact right spot: where Paul becomes one of the Fremen by killing his first man in a duel. It’s subtle, but the whole movie builds up perfectly to that moment, making Paul’s character arc the central driving story arc. For me, it didn’t feel at all like I’d only gotten half a movie, or that the director was drawing the story out to make it into a trilogy. It felt very natural to end the story there, and a great set-up for the sequel, which should wrap up Dune itself. The third movie will conclude Paul’s story by giving us Dune Messiah, which should be really interesting, since the first movie actually did a lot to set that up. If the second movie is as good as the first, then the third one may actually be better than the book.

It’s become very fashionable these days to cast a major character as an ethnic minority, which can be really annoying. However, I wasn’t all that bothered by the decision to cast Doctor Kynes as a black woman. It did some interesting things for the character that I thought worked really well for the story, and for Paul’s relationship with Kynes. So even though that was the movie taking license from the book, I felt like it was a really good call.

One criticism that I do tend to agree with is that the characters feel a lot more like archetypes than like real people. That’s fair, not only for the movie, but for the book. My wife says that’s the main reason why she didn’t like the book, because none of the characters felt “real” to her. But that focus on archetypes is something I really enjoyed about the book, so it wasn’t as big of a problem for me with the movie.

Another point of criticism that my wife had was that neither the movie nor the book have a whole lot of joy. That’s also fair: the movie does tend to hit the same emotional notes over and over, without much variation. The most humorous part was where the Reverend Mother tells Paul “farewell, young human. I hope you live,” which wasn’t actually meant as a joke (and Mrs. Vasicek and I are totally going to use that line on our own baby from now on).

But it really did hit the sense of wonder quite spectacularly, not just with the big things like the desert and the sandworms, but the fine details like the control systems of the ornithopters, or the grittiness of the stillsuits and the spice mining equipment. It really does stick with you long after you’ve watched the movie, and makes you want to watch it over and over.

All I can say more is that I’m really, really, really looking forward to the next one!

A quick update and the future of this blog

So as you’ve probably noted by now, I’ve dropped out of doing nanowrimo. I was hitting all the daily milestones more or less until the halfway mark, when 1) I finished the novella In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight, and 2) we left for Nebraska to spend Thanksgiving with my in-laws. Between those two things, and the fact that this was our first time traveling with a baby, writing got put on the back burner for a few days, which means no nanowrimo this year.

But now that we’re here in Nebraska and it looks like we’re going to have a pretty quiet and easygoing vacation, I will probably get a decent amount of writing done before we go back to Utah at the end of the month. Who knows—I may even try to jump back on the nanowrimo train, though I’m not going to push for that. This is a vacation, after all. We all need a vacation from time to time.

But one of the things that I do want to get much better about is posting more regularly to this blog. And towards that end, I’ve come up with a plan.

Back in 2016, I deleted my social media and became something of an online hermit. For personal reasons, it was the right thing to do as it helped me to avoid all of the toxic online insanity during the (first) Trump years, and all of the gaslighting and doom porn that became so prevalent during the pandemic. If I had still been addicted to social media during all of that insanity, I would not be in a healthy place right now. But I do think it impeded my ability to connect with and build my readership, and I feel that I need to change that going forward.

Of course, I don’t just want to build an audience on a popular social media platform, only to have that audience taken away from me when the platform arbitrarily changes its policies or monetizes in some disadvantageous way. That was the big mistake that everyone made with Facebook back in the 10s. So my plan is to build up this blog first, which is a platform that I own and control, and repost content from this blog to other social media platforms as I expand my presence there. The goal is to bring my audience here and make this the center of my online activity.

But to do that, I need to post new content to my blog on a regular basis—something I haven’t really done since I jumped off of the social media merry-go-round in 2016. So I’m going to start blogging on a schedule again, taking it fairly easy at first with just two posts a week, but working it up from there.

I’ll be posting on Tuesdays and Saturdays at 11am Eastern, or 9am Mountain Time in my own neck of the woods. Tuesdays will mostly be for sharing links to interesting articles, videos, or podcasts, while Saturdays will be for more long-form posts, like book reviews, movie reviews, and state-of-the-genre type stuff. When I add a third day, that will be mostly for writing and family updates, if that’s what people are interested in. I’ll also share book excerpts, WIP excerpts, and posts about sales and book releases.

So that’s the plan. We’ll see how long it lasts. Now I’ve got a baby to watch and a book to write, not to mention Saturday’s blog post.

NaNoWriMo 2021: Day Twelve

  • Words Written Today: 2,171
  • Children of the Starry Sea: 0
  • In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight: 2,171
  • Science Fiction from A to Z: 0
  • Total Words Written: 21,736
  • Total Words Remaining: 28,264
  • Total Words Ahead: 1,732

Making good progress, even if I don’t always blog about it! Last night, I got to the really good part of the story and was nearly an hour late getting to bed, and it was a similar story the night before that, so that’s why I haven’t blogged until now. But In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight is coming along very, very well—much better than the first iteration of this story.

Also, I’m on a five-day streak of writing 2k words or more! As of this morning, I’m a day ahead in nanowrimo, and if I can hit 2k words today then I’ll still be ahead on Sunday, even if I don’t write anything at all. Woohoo!

NaNoWriMo 2021: Day Ten

  • Words Written Today: 2,255
  • Children of the Starry Sea: 0
  • In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight: 2,255
  • Science Fiction from A to Z: 0
  • Total Words Written: 17,374
  • Total Words Remaining: 32,626
  • Total Words Ahead: 704

Making good progress on In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight. With luck, I’ll finish it tomorrow or Friday.

NaNoWriMo 2021: Day Nine

  • Words Written Today: 2,079
  • Children of the Starry Sea: 0
  • In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight: 2,079
  • Science Fiction from A to Z: 0
  • Total Words Written: 15,119
  • Total Words Remaining: 34,881
  • Total Words Ahead: 116

Pretty good writing day, though it could have been better. A lot of outside distractions. Got really sucked into this one scene, though, and managed to finish it by the end of the day. This Zedekiah Wight novella is really coming together.

NaNoWriMo 2021: Day Six

  • Words Written Today: 1,454
  • Children of the Starry Sea: 1,454
  • “In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight”: 0
  • Science Fiction from A to Z: 0
  • Total Words Written: 10,992
  • Total Words Remaining: 39,008
  • Total Words Ahead: 990

Passed the 10k word mark today! Woo hoo! Unfortunately, though, I did not hit word count—I think missing it by so much yesterday really took the wind out of me. Struggled a lot with motivation today, so chalk up another one to Resistance. But 1.4k words is a heck of a lot better than nothing!

I do wonder what it’s going to be like at the end of the month, though. We’re going to be on the road visiting family from the 19th through most of the 30th, which means I’ll be doing at least 20k words on a Kindle Fire, if not more. That’s not going to be pleasant. So next week, I’m going to shoot for more like 3k or 4k words per day, in order to make things easier later on. And I don’t know how much I’ll be blogging.

NaNoWriMo 2021: Day Five

  • Words Written Today: 943
  • Children of the Starry Sea: 0
  • “In the Wake of Zedekiah Wight”: 943
  • Science Fiction from A to Z: 0
  • Total Words Written: 9,538
  • Total Words Remaining: 40,462
  • Total Words Ahead: 1,203

Not a good writing day, unfortunately. Had to do laundry at the laundromat, due to the plugged sewer line, and I didn’t get as much writing done there as I thought I would (or really, any at all). It was also much more expensive than I thought it would be. We definitely need to solve this plumbing situation, or at least find a better way to do laundry.

Still ahead, but I’m disappointed that I broke my streak of hitting my daily word count goal. Part of that might have to do with the fact that I didn’t return to the WIP, and instead just kept plugging away on the side project. But since I plan to publish this story in January, I also feel like I need to prioritize it a bit.

Anyways, hopefully tomorrow is a better writing day.

NaNoWriMo 2021: Day Three

  • Words Written Today: 2,295
  • Children of the Starry Sea: 946
  • Science Fiction from A to Z: 1,346
  • Total Words Written: 6,389
  • Total Words Remaining: 43,611
  • Total Words Ahead: 1,388

I had some nasty insomnia last night, which wasn’t very good for my health or sanity, but did help me to get 500 words in before the sun rose and the baby got up.

Besides short stories, I’m working on the second edition of Science Fiction from A to Z, which I’m currently using as my newsletter incentive. The first edition is currently out of date, and needs a major rewrite.

Besides the insomnia, we also have a major plumbing issue that’s backed up our sewage lines for half of my in-laws’ house, including the master bedroom. Finding a bunch of sewage in the floor (and seeping through the wall into the garage) is not a lot of fun. Still managed to hit word count, though, and keep myself ahead of my nanowrimo goals.

Navigating Woke SF, Part 4: Götterdämmerung

Governor Andrew Cuomo announced his resignation today, after his sexual harrassment scandal that has seen an overwhelming number of women come forward. As tempted as I am to dive into the politics of this story, I bring it up only to provide context for this:

Yeah, I’m cringing too.

For the last several years—arguably, since the Ferguson riots and President Obama’s pivot toward intersectionality, this country has been progressing steadily toward the woke moral panic that we now find ourselves living through. Unlike the Red Scare, to which it is comparable in both scope and severity, the threat posed by “white supremacists” and other villains of the intersectional left is as laughable and contrived as the term “Cuomo-sexual,” and will age just as badly.

To anyone who studies history, it is obvious that there’s going to be backlash against all the gaslighting and hypocrisy of the woke moral panic that is currently gripping our nation. All around us are signs that the tide is beginning to turn.

The first indication that caught my attention was the “woka-cola” scandal over critical race theory (CRT) in Coca Cola’s employee training. Instead of giving a token response, Coca Cola reversed the policy and fired the executive responsible for implementing the policy. The only reason a major coproration would do something like that is because the scandal was hitting their bottom line in a way that they could not ignore—and yet, there were no organized boycotts on the part of the conservative right. Just a lot of disenchanted consumers quietly saying to themselves: “I think I’ll get a Pepsi instead.”

There are other indications of a growing cultural backlash all throughout our society, from the Marvel Cinematic Universe to viral videos of parents standing up to CRT in their kids’ schools. All of the organizations pushing the woke moral panic are little more than establishment astro-turf backed by corporate money, while the organizations pushing back are genuine grassroots movements—and they’re winning. All of the ground gained by the left during their “long march through the institutions” is about to be lost in a single generation, perhaps even a single decade. Public trust of established institutions is plummeting, and with every glaring instance of “sophisticated” woke hypocrisy, people are rejecting the establishment narrative, just like in V for Vendetta. Bollocks!

So what does this have to do with science fiction? In the second part of this blog series, I pointed out the following:

Traditional sci-fi publishing has trended to the political left (sometimes to the extreme political left) of mainstream American culture since the New Wave era back in the 60s and 70s. It seems that the campus radicals took over much of the field, not to mention the fact that American traditional publishing has always been centered in New York. But until just the last few years, it was still possible for left and right to coexist in our pluralistic society. People of different political persuasions could agree to disagree amicably, and while there may have still been whisper campaigns and secret author blacklists, you could still expect to see a healthy mix of opinions and perspectives in most places that published short stories.

That is not true today. Certain subjects and opinions have been deemed verboten, while others have been exalted to the status of eternal truth, and any story that questions or challenges the politically correct narrative doesn’t have a chance in most of these markets. In other words, science fiction has gone woke.

If I’m right and a major backlash against the woke intersectional left is brewing, then many of today’s most recognized and award-winning publications and editors are going to fall, or at least become relegated to a position of cultural insignificance. Indeed, we had an indication back in 2017 that this was already starting to happen, when it came out that China Mike Glyer buys traffic from Chinese bots to artificially boost the stats for his Hugo award winning site, File 770.

I suspect that these woke institutions within the SF field will try to maintain the illusion of cultural relevance for as long as they possibly can, much as ex-Governor Cuomo did everything he could to maintain the illusion of his fitness to hold office (even publishing a book about his leadership during the pandemic—talk about gaslighting!) until his inner circle had abandoned him, the Biden administration had called on him to resign, calls had come for his arrest, and the New York state congress had a deadline in place to begin the impeachment proceedings.

When the illusions fade and the gaslighting can no longer be maintained, there is going to be a cultural götterdämmerung—a “turbulent ending of a regime or institution.” Or perhaps the götterdämmerung has already arrived, and it ends when the illusions can no longer be maintained. Either way, it seems that the smart move is to reject these woke SF markets—or, as they so arrogantly put it, to “self-reject”—in favor of going indie, going with the semi-pro markets, and otherwise building an audience that isn’t caught up in all this woke madness.

Camp NaNoWriMo: Day Thirty One

  • Words written today: 2,521
  • Total stories written: 5
  • Total SF-AZ chapters written: 1
  • Total words written: 30,461

It’s done! I finished Camp NaNoWriMo strong, achieving my goal of 30,000 words. Didn’t finish the last story, but it’s going quite strong, and probably past the halfway point. I’ll probably finish the rough draft next month and send it to my writing group.

Good stuff! I’ve definitely broken out of whatever creative block was holding me back before, and hopefully can use this momentum to press forward and finish The Stars of Redemption next month. When I’m not doing that, I’ll be revising and polishing these stories, and probably sending them out on submission. No idea if any of the traditional markets will pick them up, but either way, I’ll be putting them out myself before too long. After all, that was my secondary goal: to produce enough short stories to be able to self-publish something new every month for the forseeable future.

Thanks for reading!