Good news! The rough human draft of Captive of the Falconstar is now complete! I finished it just this morning. It clocks in at:
- 12 chapters
- 63 scenes
- 84,786 words
The AI draft was a little bit longer, at 85,055 words. I finished that last week (I’ve been working on the AI draft and the human draft concurrently). But the AI draft was never going to be good enough to put out into the world on its own. There were definitely parts that I needed to rewrite in my own words, in order to work out the finer details of the story. That’s one of the reasons why I always do a complete human rewrite of everything I generate with AI.
The next step is to make a revision pass through the book, to check for any plot holes or loose threads, and to make sure that all of the scene and chapter transitions work the way they’re supposed to. Then I’ll make a final polishing pass, where I cut the word count by at least 10%. At that point, all it needs is a copy edit and/or a proofreading pass, and it’s ready to go out into the world!
If you want to preorder this book, you can already do so at most of the major online retailers. It’s set to release on July 11th, which is plenty of time to finish all the revisions and edits.
Captive of the Falconstar
Freedom is a fantasy—but revenge is forever.
Sonya tells herself she wants freedom—that she dreams of returning to her homeworld. But the truth burns hotter: she wants revenge. The problem is Zlata—once a captive like Sonya, now queen of the Hameji star clan. As rival wives circle for power, pressuring Zlata to produce an heir, she turns to a dangerous solution that will force her to use Sonya in ways neither woman expected.
