Is Gunslinger to the Galaxy for You?

Gunslinger to the Galaxy is a character-driven space opera about two gunslingers and the interstellar war that forces them to risk everything for Earth. It’s a fast-paced space-opera adventure told through the sharp, heartfelt, often hilarious voice of Jane Kletchka—a xenolinguist newly married to a mercenary gunslinger whose moral stubbornness keeps getting them both into trouble. This is a story about love, loyalty, danger, and the terrifying size of the galaxy when everything collapses at once. Expect a cinematic blend of military sci-fi, first-contact intrigue, and found-family courage.

What Kind of Reader Will Love This Book?

If you like…

  • Jack Campbell’s Lost Fleet
  • Lois McMaster Bujold’s Vorkosigan Saga
  • Character-driven space opera where the heart of the story is a loyal crew that refuses to quit
  • Western-flavored sci-fi heroes who charge headlong into impossible odds (with big guns and bigger convictions)
  • Xenolinguistics, alien politics, and intergalactic mystery woven into a sweeping adventure
  • Married-couple banter, warm emotional stakes, and a hero/heroine partnership forged in fire
  • High-stakes battles, warp-drive exploration, and cosmic consequences

…then Gunslinger to the Galaxy is absolutely your kind of story.

What You’ll Find Inside

You’ll follow Jane Kletchka, a brilliant xenolinguist, as she returns to Earth with her gunslinger husband Sam—only to be swept into a galactic crisis involving shattered jumpgate networks, Immortal civil wars, refugee swarms, and a catastrophic threat to Sol itself.

The tone blends romantic adventure, military sci-fi tension, and classic space-opera wonder, all grounded by Jane’s warm, honest, often funny narrative voice. Expect tight pacing, big emotional beats, and a story that moves from intimate family moments to galaxy-spanning stakes without missing a beat.

What Makes It Different

Fans of The Expanse, Honor Harrington, or Firefly will recognize the blend of frontier grit, military realism, and cross-species politics—but Gunslinger to the Galaxy takes those ideas in a fresh direction by placing a married couple at the emotional center of the story. Where many space-opera series focus on lone-wolf heroes, this book leans into the dynamics of partnership, trust, and being “equally yoked” in the middle of interstellar chaos. It combines xenolinguistic problem-solving, Immortal cosmic lore, and Western-style gunslinger ethos in a way no other space-opera series does.

What You Won’t Find

This isn’t grimdark, dystopian, or nihilistic sci-fi—there’s hardship and tragedy, but the story is ultimately hopeful, heroic, and rooted in family and faith. There is no gratuitous violence, no graphic romance, and no cynical “everyone is corrupt” worldview. If you’re looking for bleak anti-heroes or hard-SF technobabble at the expense of character, this won’t be the right fit.

Why I Think You Might Love It

At its core, this book is about ordinary people thrown into extraordinary crises who choose—over and over—to do what’s right, even when it costs them everything. Jane and Sam aren’t superheroes; they are a married couple trying to build a life together while the galaxy falls apart around them. Their courage, humor, and stubborn devotion give the story its heartbeat. If you’ve ever wanted a space-opera that delivers big adventure without losing its humanity, Gunslinger to the Galaxy was written for you.

In short, if you’re looking for a hopeful, high-adventure space opera filled with alien civilizations, military sci-fi battles, found-family warmth, and a fiercely devoted married couple, Gunslinger to the Galaxy delivers exactly that.

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Being Equally Yoked in Gunslinger to the Galaxy

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November reading recap

Books I finished

Algospeak by Adam Aleksic

The Hollywood Standard by Christopher Riley

Our Dollar, Your Problem by Kenneth Rosoff

The Daybreakers by Louis L’Amour

Social Justice Fallacies by Thomas Sowell

The Dragon’s Prophecy by Jonathan Cahn

The Exvangelicals by Sarah McCammon

Supremacy by Parmy Olson

Plain and Precious Things by D. John Butler

Lions and Scavengers by Ben Shapiro

Books I DNFed

  • Shane by Jack Schaefer
  • The Wave in the Mind by Ursula K. Le Guin
  • How to WRite like a Writer by Thomas C. Foster
  • Ilium by Dan Simmons
  • Consumed by Saabira Chaudhuri
  • Psywar by Robert W. and Jill G. Malone

ChatGPT writes a novel mashing up unpopular tropes

Last week, as an experiment, I had ChatGPT write a synopsis for a novel based on all of the most popular tropes in the trendiest and most popular SF&F subgenre right now (which turns out to be romantasy). This week, I did the exact opposite: I had ChatGPT pick out a subgenre and tropes that are super unpopular right now, but were popular 100+ years ago, and write it in such a way that it should appeal to a modern audience. This is what I got:


The Last Chronicle of Atherion

When disgraced investigative reporter Mara Kincaid receives a package from her long-missing mentor, the renowned archaeologist Dr. Alan Somerville, she knows instantly that the man she once idolized is either alive… or on the brink of death. The package contains a battered journal bound in handmade vellum, its pages inked with precise Victorian-style script—and encrypted with the classical ciphers Somerville once taught her.

Inside the journal is the first shock: Somerville claims to have found a hidden scientific enclave deep in the Amazon, a breakaway community founded in 1913 by a cabal of mathematicians, physicists, and natural philosophers who believed industrial civilization was headed inevitably toward collapse. They fled the modern world, sealed themselves off behind a natural fortress of cliffs and magnetic anomalies, and built a society dedicated to preserving rationality and “guiding” the world after its downfall.

Somerville’s entries grow stranger and more frightened as he describes being drawn deeper into this isolated world of relic technology, ritualized science, and people who speak a dialect derived from early-20th-century scientific jargon. The final pages end abruptly—mid-sentence.

Mara, living in the hollow of a career destroyed by a biotech company’s elaborate hoax, sees this as her one chance at redemption. If Somerville truly discovered a hidden society built by scientists who fled the modern world before World War I… the story could redefine her life. Or it could kill her.

She hires a bush pilot and recruits Dr. João Silva, a hard-nosed Brazilian ethnobotanist who believes Somerville went mad. Following the journal’s directions, they travel into a remote region even satellite mapping avoids. Strange phenomena begin immediately: plants glowing faintly at night, ruins arranged with geometric precision, and finally, the discovery of perfectly preserved 1920s expedition equipment—utterly untouched by decay. Someone has been here, and someone has erased their trail.

At night, they pick up a faint, rhythmic broadcast on an antique radio band: a voice chanting axioms, theorems, and fragments of scientific scripture. Silva calls it static. Mara calls it a warning.

When the team scales the final ridge, the jungle falls away to reveal an impossible sight: a vast, hidden plateau ringed by magnetic cliffs, crowned with botanical gardens and stone towers carved with the equations of Maxwell and Faraday like holy writ.

They are captured almost immediately.

The people of Atherion do not resemble the “lost tribes” of colonial fiction. They dress like Edwardian naturalists, speak with the precision of logicians, and treat the outside world as a barbaric wasteland. Their society blends early industrial craft with advanced botanical engineering and neural conditioning; their gardens glow with bio-luminescent trees, their windchimes calibrate emotional states, and their children are trained in “rational virtues” from birth.

The leader of the enclave, an elderly man known as The Curator, welcomes Mara with unsettling courtesy. His philosophical monologues are brilliant and chilling, as he explains the enclave’s founding: a small band of scientists, horrified by the direction of global politics and industry, calculated that civilization was doomed to cycle through collapses. They built Atherion not merely to survive disaster, but to shape what came after.

But the enclave has fractured. Some wish to remain hidden forever. Others, led by a radical faction, want to accelerate the world’s collapse so they can emerge as its saviors.

Mara is placed in comfortable captivity, kept in a suite lined with botanical lattices and soft music scientifically tuned to alter mood. It feels like a benevolent prison—until she realizes her meals are dosed with neuro-modulators and her journal entries are being read aloud in another room. “We observe all variables,” says her attendant with a serene smile.

Somerville is nowhere to be found.

Through careful manipulation and coded notes disguised as botanical sketches, Mara discovers that Somerville infiltrated the radical faction—and then tried to defect. He was captured and placed in Atherion’s most disturbing creation: the Cerebral Echo Chamber, a pseudo-scientific device that uses electromagnetic resonance to amplify the last neural patterns of a dying mind. The voice on the radio was him—looped, fragmented, desperately trying to reach her.

The Curator reveals the enclave’s ultimate plan: beneath the plateau lies a geomechanical engine built on discredited early-20th-century theories of resonance. When activated, it will send a coordinated electromagnetic pulse around the world, collapsing power grids and communications networks. A “humane reset,” they claim—after which Atherion will emerge with preserved knowledge to shepherd humanity into a rational future.

This is the catastrophe Somerville warned her about.

As the ceremony to activate the engine approaches—a bizarre scientific liturgy involving glossolalia of equations—Mara discovers a deeper personal twist: the Curator is Somerville’s father, a man Somerville never knew. Somerville himself fathered a child in Atherion, a boy now grown into a brilliant but indoctrinated young scientist being groomed as heir to the radical faction.

Mara’s breakthrough comes when she deciphers the final encrypted pages of Somerville’s journal: instructions for how to disable the engine. Somerville built part of it under duress, but embedded a failsafe in the design—one that can only be activated by someone who understands both his notes and the mindset of Atherion’s founders. It’s a puzzle only Mara can solve.

With the help of Silva and a small dissident faction within the enclave, Mara stages a daring escape, infiltrating the caverns beneath the plateau. The engine is breathtaking: a labyrinth of tuning forks, pendulums, gears, and crystalline resonators humming like a hive. The Curator begins the initiation sequence just as Mara arrives. A philosophical confrontation ensues—father against son, ideology against truth. Somerville, rescued from the echo chamber but broken and half-delirious, begs Mara to finish what he started.

In the final moment, Mara triggers Somerville’s failsafe, overloading the machine and causing its harmonic network to collapse. The resulting seismic tremors bring down parts of the plateau, flooding chambers and shattering Atherion’s ideological core. As the enclave evacuates, Somerville collapses, whispering the line he tried to transmit through the static: “Utopias fall. Equations break.”

Mara carries him out as the plateau splits behind them.

Months later, she publishes the story as The Last Chronicle of Atherion, combining her report with Somerville’s journal excerpts. The world is stunned. Atherion’s survivors struggle to adapt; their utopian certainty evaporates when exposed to reality. Somerville, recovering but permanently altered, contributes the final entry:

“We sought refuge from the world and became prisoners of our own models. Civilization endures not through isolation, but through the courage to stand in the open, flawed and uncertain.”

Mara closes the chronicle and sends it to press. She has her story—one that will redefine everything she once believed. But more importantly: she has found something no utopia ever allowed.

A reason to face the world as it truly is.

Moral Courage in Gunslinger to the Stars

What does it mean to do the right thing when the galaxy around you is chaotic, corrupt, or outright absurd? Gunslinger to the Stars takes that question and drops it squarely in the lap of Sam Kletchka—a mercenary gunslinger navigating a dangerous galactic frontier who keeps choosing responsibility even when no one is watching, rewarding, or deserving. At its heart, this space-western adventure is about moral courage: the stubborn, unfashionable insistence on doing the right thing in a universe that rarely makes it easy.

Where the Idea Came From

This theme grew out of a mashup of influences—long conversations with writer friends, a subplot from Schlock Mercenary, and the realization that a “rogue Immortal” character needed a counterweight with a strong personal code. Around the same time, I was watching Breaking Bad, fascinated by characters like Mike Ehrmantraut—tough, pragmatic men who do terrible things for complicated reasons. To push back against such a villainous force, I imagined Sam Kletchka: a gunslinger in a messy, morally gray universe who lives by a code and keeps choosing the harder path simply because it’s right, even when the galaxy doesn’t care.

How Moral Courage Shapes the Story

At every major turning point in Gunslinger to the Stars, Sam Kletchka’s choices are defined by moral courage—the instinct to protect others even when it’s dangerous, inconvenient, or unwinnable. He charges after kidnapped empaths when walking away would be safer; he shields Jane’s diplomatic idealism with his hard-won pragmatism; he survives abandonment in the desert through sheer stubborn responsibility; and he repeatedly throws himself into battles around war rigs, jumpgates, and alien war parties because no one else can or will. His personal code drives the story’s conflicts, shapes the character dynamics, and pushes this space-opera adventure toward a climax where courage isn’t about glory but about doing the right thing in a lawless, unpredictable, morally gray galaxy.

What Moral Courage Says About Us

Sam’s story reflects something deeply human: we don’t get to choose the worlds we’re born into, but we do get to choose what kind of people we become. In a galaxy run by Immortals, riddled with slavers, warlords, and manipulative telepaths, Sam’s personal code becomes his anchor—the thing that keeps him from becoming the very wolf he warns Jane about. His courage isn’t flashy heroism; it’s the uncomfortable, everyday kind that demands sacrifice, loyalty, and integrity when it would be easier to look away. In that sense, the book becomes a mirror for readers who love character-driven science fiction that asks what we stand for when the world pushes back.

Why This Theme Matters to Me

I wrote this book at a very different time in my life—years after Genesis Earth, when my own view of the world had shifted. I still believed in cultural understanding and bridging divides, but I’d also seen enough to know that evil doesn’t always yield to good intentions. Like Sam, I firmly believe in the right to defend oneself and others, and I’ve had long debates about the responsibilities that come with that. I wanted to write a character who lives at the intersection of those values—someone who understands violence, hates it, but won’t walk away when others depend on him. That tension, that conviction, is why moral courage felt like the beating heart of Gunslinger to the Stars.

Where to Get the Book

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Happy Thanksgiving!

Here are some of the things that I’m thankful for, in no particular order:

  • My wife
  • My kids
  • Our house
  • Our church
  • Our Savior, Jesus Christ
  • My parents and extended family
  • My in-laws, and their help with watching the kids
  • That we live in the United States of America
  • That we live in Utah Valley
  • That we live so close to family
  • That we have sufficient for our needs
  • The Orem Public Library
  • Brigham Young University, especially the family study room at the library
  • My wife’s job at BYU
  • My writing career, and the opportunity to be an indie author
  • Good food, especially on waffle day
  • Good weather, even in November
  • The mountains and nature, which we have so abundantly here in Utah
  • That we have a working vehicle that can fit all of us
  • That we live so close to so many temples
  • That Dallin H. Oaks is the president of the church
  • That we have the Book of Mormon, in addition to the Bible and other scripture
  • That Donald Trump is the president of this country
  • That I don’t have to be politically correct on my own blog
  • That I still have a good relationship with my Democrat parents
  • That so many conflicts in the world appear to be trending toward peace
  • That we own so many great books—more than we know where to shelve them, in fact
  • That I have so many great readers!

How I Would Vote Now: 2014 Hugo Awards (Best Novel)

The Nominees

Warbound by Larry Correia

Parasite by Mira Grant

Ancillary Justice by Ann Leckie

Neptune’s Brood by Charles Stross

The Actual Results

  1. Ancillary Justice by Ann Leckie
  2. Neptune’s Brood by Charles Stross
  3. Parasite by Mira Grant
  4. Warbound by Larry Correia

How I Would Vote Now

  1. Warbound by Larry Correia
  2. No Award

Explanation

Technically, the entire Wheel of Time series was also on the ballot this year, but there is no other year in which a complete series (as opposed to the latest book in the series) was ever on the ballot. It seems really weird that they would do that just for Wheel of Time, so I’m going to act as if it never happened. Otherwise, The Wheel of Time would probably get my #2 slot, just above No Award.

I haven’t read Warbound, but I have read enough of Hard Magic, the first book in Larry Correia’s Grimnoir Chronicles, to know that I’m going to read the rest. The magic system is a lot more explicitly rules-based than much of his other stuff, but the characters are great, the story is great, the world is fascinating… it’s definitely up there with the rest of his work. Good stuff. Great writer.

Ann Leckie holds the record for the author I’ve DNFed the fastest. Ancillary Justice is the book that put her on the map. The main character is a sentient spaceship, which sounds like a pretty cool starting concept… until you realize that the most exciting thing about this spaceship is that it’s transgender, and views every other human as a “she.” Derp. The whole book is obsessed with leftist gender politics, which is why I believe that No Award is more deserving than this garbage. I predict it will not age well.

I forget why I DNFed Neptune’s Brood. I think it had to do with sex, violence, and drug use that was just too explicit for me. When I was in my 20s, I was willing to do dark and gritty, but these days I have little patience for it. I think this may have been the book that made me decide to skip Charles Stross as an author, so there must have been a lot of it.

As for Parasite, I think the main thing for that one was that I just felt no interest or connection with any of the characters. Glancing over the book, it doesn’t appear that it had any explicitly terrible content, and I vaguely remember getting bored with the story and deciding that it wasn’t worth continuing. But having read and DNFed several other works by this author, I know she has a tendency to veer into crossing my lines (such as building sexual tension between a brother and sister, or throwing in weird occult stuff, or making her main character a transgender child). And running the book through ChatGPT, it appears that the book has an undercurrent of nihilism, which I absolutely cannot stand in any fiction. Perhaps I picked up on that soon enough to DNF it early.

Of the three books from this year that I DNFed, I’d be most willing to give Parasite another try, then maybe Neptune’s Brood. But I wouldn’t be willing to read Ancillary Justice (or anything else by Ann Leckie, for that matter) unless you paid me damn well for it. And even then…

Is Gunslinger to the Stars for You?

Gunslinger to the Stars is a character-driven space opera novel that blends Western adventure, first-contact science fiction, and pulpy action. It’s fast-paced, voice-driven, and built around a loyal, reluctant hero navigating a dangerous galactic frontier. It’s told in the unmistakable voice of Sam Kletchka—half gunslinger, half star-hopping troubleshooter, and 100% fun.

What Kind of Reader Will Love This Book?

If you like…

  • Classic space adventure with modern voice and humor, where the hero solves problems with grit, guts, and an outrageous arsenal of lovingly described guns
  • Found-family dynamics between a rough-around-the-edges gunslinger, a principled xenolinguist, a telepathic outcast, and a trio of shapeshifting empaths
  • Galaxy-spanning mysteries, alien politics, and first-contact stakes that push characters to their limits
  • The feel of a Western gunslinger dropped straight into a richly imagined galactic frontier

…then Gunslinger to the Stars is absolutely your kind of story.

What You’ll Find Inside

Gunslinger to the Stars (Book 1 of the Gunslinger Trilogy) follows Sam Kletchka, a New Texas gunslinger stranded in the Gorinal Cluster just as the local jumpgate—the only way out—mysteriously goes dark. What starts as a simple job escalates into a battle for survival involving hidden alien races, shape-shifting empaths, worldships, and a rising threat the Immortals never wanted anyone to discover. The tone blends wry humor with escalating danger, and the style is fast-paced, voice-driven, and cinematic—equal parts action romp and big-idea sci-fi. The result is a story that feels both classic and fresh: a pulpy, heartfelt adventure that’s as much about loyalty and moral clarity as it is about space battles and exotic technology.

What Makes It Different

Fans of Firefly and Schlock Mercenary will recognize the snappy banter, the found-crew dynamic, and the blend of humor with high-stakes action. But Gunslinger to the Stars pushes those familiar ingredients in new directions: the gunslinger-as-space-ranger angle gives the book a distinctive American-frontier voice, while the empath culture, the Immortals’ centuries-deep manipulations, and the emergence of the Draxxians create a myth-arc that feels simultaneously expansive and personal. Where many space operas lean on military hierarchy or techno-fetishism, this one leans into character, moral philosophy, and the uneasy tensions between peacekeeping and necessary force—all told through Sam’s dry, self-aware perspective.

This story blends classic space western tropes — the reluctant hero, the ragtag crew, and the dangerous frontier — with a deeper mystery about ancient alien powers. If you enjoy space western stories with a strong first-contact throughline, you’re going to enjoy this book.

What You Won’t Find

If you’re looking for grimdark bleakness, heavy technobabble, or a cynical antihero who never grows, this isn’t that. And if you want romance-heavy sci-fi or endless political intrigue, this book doesn’t go down those roads either. But if you want hopeful, character-focused adventure with humor, heart, and a hero who takes responsibility for his choices—sometimes reluctantly—you’ll feel right at home.

Why I Think You Might Love It

I wrote this story at a time when I needed to shake things up creatively, by writing something fun, energetic, and different from what I had been writing at the time. I was also going through a time when my worldview was changing, and I was questioning a lot of my old assumptions. This book grew out of a number of things: from my conversations with close friends, my love of classic pulp sci-fi, and from the idea of a lone wanderer who tries—however imperfectly—to do the right thing. The result, I believe, was a book with a lot of heart that captures that spark of wonder that made me first fall in love with science fiction. If that’s what you’re looking for, I think you’re going to love it!

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Read about moral courage in Gunslinger to the Stars.

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ChatGPT writes a trashy novel that fits all the current market trends

So just for fun, I asked ChatGPT to list the post popular tropes in science fiction and fantasy literature right now, pick the most popular subgenre, and write up a novel synopsis that mashes up all of those tropes.

To no one’s surprise, the subgenre it chose was romantasy, but it also threw in dragons, dark academia, and time magic. Here is the complete synopsis:


Here is a tighter, sharper, more compelling 1000-word synopsis that follows the same outline but sells the story harder—maximizing emotional hooks, character stakes, and the high-heat romantasy appeal. Spoilers intact.


The Hundredth Life of the Dragon-Bonded

Rina Ashvale has always been ordinary—poor, unnoticed, unimportant. But on the morning of the Day of Choosing, she wakes with the unshakable feeling that she’s lived this day before. And died in it. Images flash behind her eyes: burning skies, a dragon’s scream, a prince’s hand dripping with blood. None of it makes sense.

Everything changes when Sereth, the most ancient and aloof of all dragons, chooses her as his rider. The bond hits like a lightning strike: thousands of half-formed memories, shards of forgotten lives, and a sense of wrongness in the fabric of the world. Sereth refuses to explain, and Rina finds herself thrust into the elite dragon war-college—completely unprepared, utterly overwhelmed, and lodged in the same wing as the kingdom’s most dangerous cadet: Prince Kael Vorian, heir to their nation’s long-time enemy.

Their first interaction is a disaster. Kael—brilliant, beautiful, and infuriating—sees Rina as an unworthy upstart bonded to a dragon she doesn’t deserve. Rina sees him as an arrogant elite who’s never had to fight for anything real. But whenever they clash in the skies, sparks fly far beyond anger. Something in the dragon bond won’t let them ignore each other.

As Rina trains, she slowly forms a found family with three other misfit cadets—gentle Jory, fierce Thalia, and quick-tongued Marek. Life at the academy carries surprising warmth: late-night mess hall confessions, shared exhaustion after flight drills, stolen pastries in the city. For the first time in her life, Rina feels like she belongs.

But then the déjà vu returns—harder, sharper. She predicts an ambush drill seconds before it happens, saving Kael’s life in a maneuver she can’t explain. When she confronts Sereth, the dragon finally admits the truth:

The world is trapped in a time loop. Ninety-nine times, humanity has fallen to the Void. Ninety-nine times, reality has reset to the beginning of this academy term. Dragons remember. Humans do not.
Except Rina.

Her growing memories mean one thing: she may be the first human in a hundred loops capable of breaking the cycle.

But the moment Rina begins changing events—saving lives that used to be lost, altering training outcomes—the Void adapts. Darker monsters appear. Missions that were once safe become fatal. Jory loses his arm. Marek nearly dies. And Rina realizes a horrifying truth: every change she makes doesn’t erase suffering—it only shifts it onto someone else.

Through it all, Kael remains her fiercest rival and most dangerous ally. Their tension spikes during a magical mishap that amplifies emotion, throwing them into a breathless near-scene neither can forget. During the annual Festival of the First Flame, in the chaos of a Void creature attack, they end up pressed together in a narrow alley, clinging to each other with equal parts fear and longing. When they finally give in to the desire they’ve been denying—an explosive, passionate moment in the dragon stables—they can no longer pretend what’s between them is merely conflict.

But Rina’s growing memories deliver an unbearable blow: in one of the previous loops, Kael burned her village to the ground to slow the Void’s advance. He admits it. He regrets it. He would do it again if it meant saving the world.

Their fragile connection shatters.

As the loop destabilizes, the world begins to tear. Rina slips into the Twilight Reach, the dream-realm dragons inhabit between deaths. There she meets the Hollow King, a godlike Void entity who has been feeding on the loop for centuries. He offers her a seductive bargain: sever the dragon bonds and the loop will end forever—no more death, no more suffering. But it would also mean the extinction of dragons, the world’s only memory-keepers.

Rina refuses. She will not save the world by erasing its heart.

Meanwhile, Kael uncovers a devastating truth: his father, the emperor, is planning a military strike to seize the academy’s dragons, a move that could break the loop catastrophically and hand victory to the Void. Kael offers to kill his father to prevent it. Rina stops him. Instead, she proposes a desperate ritual to jump the timeline forward—getting ahead of the emperor’s plan.

The ritual fails spectacularly.

Time fractures.

The academy splits into two overlapping timelines—the unchanged past loop and the altered timeline Rina and Kael created. Students flicker in and out of existence. Some have duplicates. Others appear as ghosts of who they were meant to be.

Rina’s squad members are caught between versions of themselves. With Sereth’s help, Rina merges their memories, giving each friend the best parts of both lives—even if it costs Sereth more of his dwindling strength. Every memory he surrenders feeds the growing collapse of the loop.

Rina finally understands: dragons carry the burden of memory, but they cannot change it. That’s why the loop always resets. Only a human mind—someone capable of holding all ninety-nine lives at once—can force time forward for good.

She volunteers to carry the full weight of the loop. Kael refuses to let her do it alone.

Together, in the Twilight Reach, Rina and Kael confront the Hollow King. Sereth sacrifices himself to shatter the loop, unleashing all his stored timelines in one final blaze. The Hollow King retreats—but not before warning that breaking the cycle will unleash consequences no one can predict.

Rina and Kael awaken in a world that has never existed before: one without resets, without second chances, without dragons except for a few younglings who survived the collapse. The academy is in ruins. Their nations have fractured. Rina’s village is gone in every timeline. Kael is disowned. The world is raw and wounded—but real.

With their surviving squadmates, they build a small dragon-rider outpost beside a river. Half refuge, half academy, it becomes the first place Rina has ever chosen for herself. Kael stays with her—not as a prince, not as a rival, but as the man who shared a hundred lifetimes of pain and desire with her.

For the first time, dawn breaks on a future that isn’t written.

Standing together in the new light, Rina and Kael speak the vow that binds them:

“We will be the dragons who remember.”

The loop is broken.
The world is reborn.
And their love—forged across a hundred lives—has finally outrun time itself.


So what do you think? Does it sound like something you’d actually want to read? Like something that might even be better than most of the trashy, trendy novels out there, even if it’s total AI slop?

I have no intention of actually writing this book, so if you feel like writing (or generating) it, knock yourself out. Just send me a link if you actually publish it.

Breaking the Time Paradox in The Stars of Redemption

What if the deadliest threat humanity ever faced wasn’t an alien invasion or a rogue AI… but a mistake we keep repeating that always ends with the destruction of Earth? The Stars of Redemption, the last book in my young adult science fiction trilogy, explores this question.

At its core, The Stars of Redemption is about the struggle to break a closed time loop, stop a rogue superintelligence, and rewrite a future that seems unchangeable. This makes The Stars of Redemption a classic time-loop science fiction story, built around temporal paradoxes, fate-versus-free-will dilemmas, and the struggle to break a repeating extinction cycle. It is a story about escaping destructive cycles, choosing hope, and fighting for a future that isn’t predetermined.

Where the Idea Came From

The idea for this theme grew out of my long, tangled journey to finish the trilogy. As I write in the author’s note, the trilogy stalled until I became a husband and father. Holding my newborn daughter for the first time made me realize that the story needed to be about cycles—time loops, family patterns, repeating trauma—and the hope that they can be broken. Only then did I understand how to write about ending the loop and choosing a new future.

How Breaking the Time Paradox Shapes the Story

The entire plot of this sci-fi book revolves around a temporal paradox created by a wormhole, a derelict starship, and a fragmented AI superintelligence. The ghost ship is both the catalyst and the prison of a machine intelligence born from the loop—a being that believes humanity must be wiped out to prevent another cycle of suffering. Every conflict Estee and Khalil face—from warped corridors to shifting timelines—exists because they are trapped inside this repeating extinction loop.

For Estee, breaking the time loop becomes a confrontation with her family’s past and her people’s future. She must decide whether humanity deserves redemption and whether history can be changed. Khalil must confront his own emotional loop: guilt, self-sacrifice, and the belief that his fate is fixed. Together, they face a question at the heart of all time-loop fiction:

Are we doomed to repeat our worst mistakes, or can we rewrite the future?

What the Time Paradox Says About Us

Time loops are powerful metaphors because we all face cycles—personal, cultural, generational—that feel impossible to escape. The paradox in this story mirrors the real world: destructive systems repeat unless someone chooses differently. By facing a machine intelligence convinced that humanity is irredeemable, the characters confront the fear that our past defines us. The book suggests a hopeful alternative: the future changes when we do.

Why This Theme Matters to Me

I didn’t truly understand this story until I became a father. My daughter made the theme real: breaking cycles isn’t abstract—it’s something we do for the next generation. That moment of holding her and realizing this is her story now, not yours helped me finish the book. The Stars of Redemption is my way of saying that even in the darkest timelines—even in repeating loops—hope is possible, and the future can be rewritten.

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