SW-VII: REPROACH is now out!

SW-VII Reproach (thumb)If you’ve been wondering what I’ve been up to lately, I’ve been busy publishing a new book!  Star Wanderers: Reproach (Part VII) is now out on Amazon, Smashwords, and Kobo as a $2.99 ebook, and should be up on Barnes & Noble and iTunes in a couple of weeks.

This now brings the total number of books I’ve published to 17.  Part VIII: Deliverance should be out in early- to mid-November, and if things go well, I should be able to put out at least one more ebook before the end of the year.

My main publishing goal, though, is to get print versions out of every Star Wanderers story before Christmas.  I got the first proof of Outworlder a few days ago, and fixed the issues with it over the weekend.  Just have to order another proof and make sure it looks good, then it’s just a matter of clicking a couple buttons and it should be up on Amazon.  Because it’s a small book, it should sell for between $4 to $6–I know there are a lot of books in this series, so I’ll do what I can to keep the prices low!

thumb (Stars of Blood and Glory)Speaking of print editions, the trade paperback of Stars of Blood and Glory is now out on Amazon and the CreateSpace store!  If you prefer to read in paper or just want a copy for your bookshelf, you can pick it up now.  I’ve gotten some requests for signed copies, so I’m going to order a few from CreateSpace and try to get those sent out in the next few weeks.  If you’re interested, shoot me an email at joseph [dot] vasicek [at] gmail [dot] com, and I’ll see what I can do.

That’s just about it.  So much publishing–when am I going to get a chance to just write?  It’s been a lot of fun though, and I’m happy to get these books out to you guys.  Next week, I’ll turn my focus back to Sons of the Starfarers and hopefully make some good progress on the first book of that series.

Thanks for reading!

SW-VII: REPROACH coming out soon!

SW-VII Reproach (thumb)So I’ve been working hard at Star Wanderers: Reproach (Part VII) these past few days, and I’m happy to say that it will be coming out sooner than I’d expected!  I finished a quick proofreading and touch up pass today, which mostly involved cutting some unnecessary paragraphs and rewording a few sentences here and there.  I also wrote the author’s note and acknowledgments, so all it needs is another proofreading pass and it should be good to go!

This story wasn’t quite as difficult as Sacrifice, but it certainly was a challenge, and I’m surprisingly pleased with the result.  Revisiting the Star Wanderers story from Mariya and Noemi’s points of view was a great experience, and I did my best to really get into their heads and show what they were thinking.  The themes are a bit unusual for a science fiction story, but if you’ve followed the Star Wanderers this far, it should be another fun and interesting ride!

I suppose this is where I should include an excerpt or something.  I’m not a fan of huge, unwieldy excerpts, so here’s a quickie:

The others laughed with her. As they returned to their work, however, a strange silence fell over them, as if some unspoken tension hung thick in the air. Mariya glanced nervously at her mother, making Noemi wonder if it was something between the two of them. But instead of speaking with Mariya, Salome turned to her.

“About Jerem-ahra,” she said. “He’s a good man, isn’t he?”

“Oh, yes,” said Noemi, slowing down a little as she folded the last of the clothes. “Why?”

“God knows there aren’t many good men where we’re going—the Far Outworlds, I mean.” Salome pulled the bed-sheet taught and tucked it expertly beneath the thin foam mattress. “Not many Deltans out there either. At Zarmina, we’ll be the only ones.”

Noemi frowned. She glanced at Mariya, who was watching her intently out of the corner of her eye. Something was going on here—she didn’t know what it was exactly, but it felt as if they were backing her into a corner.

“Really?” she asked, her arms growing tense. “Just the three of us?”

“And father too, of course,” Mariya interjected. “He wasn’t born Deltan, but he’s as good as one of us now.”

“And Jerem-ahra,” said Salome.

What are they trying to get at? Noemi wondered. Both of them were staring at her now, making her hands feel clammy. It was as if they expected an answer from her, but she didn’t even know what they were asking.

“J-Jeremahra hasn’t been baptized yet,” she said, her voice quavering. “I don’t know how to bring it up. We understand each other when it comes to little things, but—”

“I can talk with him!” Mariya said, smiling cheerily. “I can help translate almost anything for you. And even though he hasn’t been baptized yet, I’m sure he’ll come around eventually. When he married you, he practically married into it—just like daddy. For your sake, he’ll convert before too long.”

That’s odd, Noemi thought to herself. Back on Oriana Station, she did everything she could to avoid bringing up religion. It wasn’t like she’d stopped believing, though—just that she was nervous talking with people who didn’t share their faith. Considering all the anti-Deltan bigotry back on Oriana Station, Noemi didn’t blame her. But why was she so eager to see Jeremahra converted now?

“Let me put it this way,” said Salome. “Where we’re going, we need to stick together. And what’s a better way to do that than to become one family?”

Stars of Holy Earth, Noemi realized, they want Mariya to become his second wife. Her eyes widened, and an awful sinking feeling began to pull at her gut even as her legs turned to water.

I’m not sure whether to hire a proofreader or just proofread it myself.  I doubt I’ll find someone who can turn it around before the end of the week, but who knows?  The manuscript is pretty clean, though, so it shouldn’t take too much work to catch the last few typos–just a good eye.

In any case, I’ll leave you with the track I’m listening to right now.  It’s a great track by Paul van Dyk, Arty, and Sue McLaren, remixed by Pedro Del Mar.  Stuff like this really helps me to get in the zone.

Take care!

Check me out on Wattpad!

So I signed up recently for a site called Wattpad, which is basically like Deviantart for writers.  Once you have a profile, you can post stories or chapters or excerpts, and other members can read your stuff, comment on it, or vote it up.  It’s designed especially for smartphones, so if you have one, that’s probably the best way to access it.

You can find my Wattpad profile here.  I’m still kind of a beginner at this, so it’s going to take me a while to figure out how it works.  It seems like the kind of thing I would have become obsessive about back in high school, kind of like how my sister was obsessive about AOL Instant Messaging.  I’m not a teenager anymore, but hopefully I’m not too old to still have fun with it!

The most interesting thing about the site is how it allows you to release a book serially, by chapter or scene.  Right now, I’m posting Star Wanderers: Outworlder (Part I), with updates on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays.  If there’s interest, I may post a few more Star Wanderers stories as well.

My curiosity about Wattpad got started when I read this guest post on Lindsay Buroker’s blog.  The concept of serializing a book like a webcomic seemed kind of cool to me, and the idea of a reading community seemed pretty neat as well.  At first, I was a little leery because it would basically mean giving away my books for free, but then I thought about it and figured why not?  It’s worth giving it a try.  I’m pretty sure it won’t cost me sales, and if it gives me a chance to interact with people who love my books, awesome!

So yeah, if you’re on Wattpad, check me out!  And if you’re not, check the site out!  Like Deviantart, there’s a lot of fanfic and teen angst, but that’s to be expected–and actually, I think it’s kind of cool.  Anyone can post a story, and anything can take off.  It’s all a big community where there is no line between writers and readers, which seems like a really exciting concept.  So yeah, check it out!

Quick update and a funny thing

SW-VII Reproach (thumb)First, just a quick update on my latest writing projects.  I got the feedback from my second round of test readers for Star Wanderers: Reproach (Part VII), and while I think the story still needs work, it’s getting closer. I probably won’t be able to get it out by the end of September, but first or second week of October it should be ready.

It’s funny–I sent it to a guy and a girl, and while the guy thought it didn’t need any changes (and he’s studying to be an editor), the girl pointed out a few things that need a little more reinforcement and development.  It’s mostly just minor changes I think, getting more into Noemi’s viewpoint and figuring out exactly what she’s going through, and making that clear to the reader.  So yeah, it shouldn’t be too hard.

In some ways, writing this book has been like writing myself out of a corner.  The story in Reproach runs parallel with the events of Sacrifice, and some of the stuff that happens there is pretty complicated.  For example, it’s got a sixteen year old girl who feels like her only hope at happiness is to convince her best friend to share her husband, and the best friend actually kind of comes around to it by the end, though the whole ordeal is almost unbearable for her.

Writing about monogamous relationships is hard enough when you’ve always been single–it’s doubly hard when you’re writing about polygamy.  But I’m actually fairly pleased with the way it’s come out so far–even though it’s not quite ready to be published, everyone who’s read it has really gotten into it, even the readers who haven’t yet read the earlier books in the series.  It’s been a challenging book to write, but it’s been a gratifying one, and I think you guys are going to enjoy it.

Of course, all of this is yanking me away from Sons of the Starfarers, which is really kind of aggravating.  On an interview I listened to recently, Jim Butcher said that writers are either writing, thinking about what they’re writing, or thinking about what they’ve written.  The way my brain is wired, I can only really do one of those things at a time, and I’d much rather write or think about what I’m writing than think about what I’ve written.  But yeah, Reproach is more important, so after finishing the current chapter I’ll put Sons of the Starfarers on hold for a couple weeks.

Also, I’m working to get print editions out for all of my Star Wanderers books before Christmas.  Part of this is because of the new Matchbook program from Amazon, but mostly it’s just because … well, why not?  For those of you who want paperback versions of these novellas, that will soon be an option.  I’m having a little trouble figuring out the cover art (RBG vs. CMYK, getting the covers to print attractively instead of turning out way too dark, etc), but that shouldn’t take longer than a few weeks to iron out.  Expect to see parts I-IV out by November.

Finally, a funny thing happened to me at Leading Edge.  For those of you who don’t know, it’s a student-run science fiction & fantasy magazine where student volunteers read every story submission and write a critique for the author.  Well, while sitting in the slushpile, one of the editors came in and showed me a story that I’d critiqued … twice!  The first time, I’d given it a rejection.  The second time, I’d actually recommended that the editors buy it!

Well, I racked my brain a little bit to figure out what had happened, and as close as I can tell the only real difference was in how distracted I’d been when I’d read it.  The first time, it had been fairly noisy and there’d been a lot of distractions.  The story had some good parts to it, which I mentioned in the letter, but I didn’t really pick up on the character motivations well, so I rejected it based on that.  The second time, though, it had been quiet enough for me to really pay attention to the story, enough to really get what was going on.  I finished it, and the ending moved me so much that I knew I’d have to recommend that we publish it.

The editor wanted to keep the rejection sheet anyway, but I tossed it in the garbage since really it wasn’t all that helpful anyway.  And the moral, if there is one, is to pick up every story with the idea firmly in mind that you’ve got a potential gem in your hands.  Too often, I think we read stuff flippantly, as if we already know that it’s not worth our time and attention.  Well, don’t do that!  Who knows but what you’ve got your new favorite story of all time sitting right in front of you?  Give it a chance!

And on that note, I leave you with this:

See you guys around!

Novella woes and farmers markets

Today I wrote about 2.6 words in my current WIP (Sons of the Starfarers), which didn’t really feel like it because I was constantly getting distracted.  Still, 2.6 words is pretty solid–it’s about mid-range for me.  If I can hit that every day from here on out (which is doubtful, but hey), the rough draft should be finished before the end of the month.

The crazy thing is that I just hit the inciting incident at the end of today’s writing session, after passing the 6k word mark.  For a mid-sized novella, that’s pretty late.  In the classic three act structure, the inciting incident usually hits between the 12%-15% mark, but this one is well past 20% for a 30k word novella–and just barely at 16% for a 40k.

So in layman’s terms, how long is this book going to be?  Probably longer than any of the Star Wanderers stories, but not quite as long as Genesis Earth.  It probably won’t turn into a full-fledged novel, since there’s only one viewpoint character, but I can already tell that it’s going to flirt with the line between novella and novel.

We’ll see how it turns out.  I’m still really excited about this story, and even though I don’t have a clear idea how to write the ending, I do know exactly how it’s going to end, if that makes any sense.  I’ve got a clear idea of the series arc that this book is going to set up, but I don’t yet have a clear idea of the book’s self-contained arc.  Once I figure that out, maybe I’ll be able to trim it down to a 30k novella after all.

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I visited the Stadium Farmer’s Market in Provo for the first time today.  It was pretty neat–lots of great produce, a nice community atmosphere, and a few quirky things like Jalapeno Jelly and tie died baby jumpers that you can’t really find in a mainstream grocery store.  I came away with some excellent peaches and a hankering to come back next week for more.

Anyhow, the trip got me thinking how indie publishing is kind of like a farmer’s market.  You’ve got everything from the guys who sell their produce out of unmarked paint buckets (writers who toss their books up to amazon with hardly a thought) to the local farm operations with pretty banners, pretty baskets, and laminated fact sheets drilling down on every possible difference between Elberta and Briscoe peaches (writers who go to great lengths to organize their own small presses and become Facebook/Twitter/Blogging personalities).

Almost everyone gives away free samples, which actually does a lot to drive sales.  In a similar way, most indie writers either have a couple of perma-free titles or free-pulse their books.  Everyone at the farmer’s market tries to be friendly and reach out to the customers (kind of like authors on Facebook and Twitter), but for me personally this kind of drives me away.  A good entertaining sales pitch, though, can be quite interesting.  I listened to the guy selling honey for almost twenty minutes, going on and on about his wares.  It’s clear he’s in a business that he loves.

Even though the fruit in the farmer’s market tends to have more blemishes than the stuff you find in the mainstream store, it is WAAAY more fresh and delicious.  Similarly, the stuff from the mainstream presses might be a lot more edited and polished, but the true innovation and formula-breaking stuff is happening in the world of self-publishing.  Publishers want things to be more predictable and formulaic so that they can have a better idea how something is going to sell, but indies are free to try almost anything.

Those aren’t the only parallels, either.  The more I think about it, the more it seems that being a self-published indie writer (or “author-publisher,” a newer term that I think I actually prefer) is a lot like being a local small farmer.  I’m sure there are differences, but the similarities are quite striking.

And now I’m really wishing I’d bought some of that honey.

Trope Tuesday: Foolish sibling, responsible sibling

Whenever you’ve got two characters who interact with each other a lot, chances are that one is a foil of the other.  There are a lot of reasons for this, but the big reason is that it helps to highlight certain character traits by providing contrast.  Because the contrast is the important thing, the relationship between the characters can take a variety of possible forms.  It may be that one is the hero and the other the sidekick, or (if they’re villains) perhaps one is the Big Bad and the other is the Dragon.  If enemy mine or one of the other frenemy tropes is in play, they might be on opposing sides.

Foolish sibling, responsible sibling is what happens when the character foils are siblings.  It’s a subtrope of sibling yin-yang that contrasts the character traits of responsibility and recklessness, duty and prodigality, and how the two opposites somehow manage (or not) to live together and stand up for each other in spite of their differences.

It may be used to set up an aesop, usually along the lines of “be like the responsible sibling, not the foolish one,” but that’s not always the case.  It might be that the younger sibling is closer to earth and the uptight responsible one needs to learn how to loosen up.  Simon from Firefly kind of fits that mold, though he learns to loosen up not from his sister River so much as from the rest of Mal’s crew.

In a lot of stories, it’s not necessarily meant to send a message so much as set up an interesting dynamic between two equally sympathetic characters.  In the movie Gettysburg, for example, Lawrence Chamberlain is the commanding officer of the regiment, and thus has to lead the men, follow military protocol, etc, while his annoying younger brother Tom calls him by name and forgets to salute him, runs around chatting it up with union soldiers and rebel prisoners alike, and generally seems a lot more loose and carefree.

Usually, the responsible character is the older sibling, for reasons that should be fairly obvious to anyone who grew up with siblings.  As the oldest child in my own family, I can readily sympathize with the dutiful son, since I more or less was one.  That’s not always the case, though.  In sitcoms where the middle child is the main character, usually it falls on them to thanklessly pick up the slack (yeah, being the middle child pretty much sucks).  Bart and Lisa from The Simpsons are a good example of this.

I played with this a little in Desert Stars with some of the minor characters: as the second oldest, Surayya generally tries to do things by the book, whereas Amina tends to be more mischievous and conniving.  Michelle and Lars also fall into this trope, with Lars a carefree academy dropout and Michelle a hardworking (though also fun-loving) mechanic on her father’s ship.  Between Desert Stars and Bringing Stella Home, though, Lars completely turns around, so that by Heart of the Nebula (not yet published) he’s quite possibly one of the most responsible characters in the book (and I still have yet to give him a viewpoint … hmmm).

In Sons of the Starfarers, I’m playing with this character dynamic a lot.  Isaac is the oldest son, who always knew he would leave on his father’s starship to fulfill the Outworld traditions and seek his fortune as a star wanderer.  Aaron, on the other hand, kind of got roped into the whole thing unexpectedly (see Star Wanderers: Benefactor) and hasn’t yet matured.  The events of the story will no doubt give him a growth arc, but in the meantime, the dynamic between the two of them is a lot of fun to write.

There are a lot of other issues in that relationship to play with too, such as promotion to parent and always someone better, but I’ll save those for another Tuesday.

Addicted to typesetting

So I just realized it’s been a looong time since I posted anything besides Trope Tuesday posts on this blog.  A lot of things have happened, and I’ve got a lot of things I want to blog about, but really all my spare time has been spent happily typesetting for Stars of Blood and Glory and Star Wanderers: Outworlder (Part I).

I always tell people that if I wasn’t a writer, I’d be a typesetter because I enjoy it so much.  I’m not sure if that’s true, because it can get a little mind-numbing after a while, but as an indie writer who only has to do it every now and again, it’s really fun!  The best part, of course, is getting to that finished product, a book full of words and paragraphs and chapters that look so beautiful on the page, which you can flip through and say “wow, I wrote that!”

The whole process is great, though, even with the frustrations like computer crashes and formatting struggles.  Fortunately, those don’t happen quite as often since I’ve more or less figured out the tools.  I use LibreOffice almost exclusively for the interior (yes, I know In Design is awesome but LibreOffice works well too), and The Gimp for the cover art.

Yesterday, I started on the cover art for Stars of Blood and Glory, thinking it would take me a few days to finish it.  Well, one thing led to another, and a few hours later I had this:

POD cover (Stars of Blood and Glory)Not bad.  I think I was able to do it so quickly because I followed the same basic pattern as Bringing Stella Home and Desert Stars.  Once you know what you’re doing, it doesn’t take very long to do it.  It also helped to have such great art (shout-out to Hideyoshi)!

So yeah, the only thing I have to do now is order the proofs and approve them.  After that, the print edition of Stars of Blood and Glory should be up on Amazon in just a couple of days, so keep an eye out for that!

Also, I don’t think Amazon has announced this to the general public yet, but this Christmas they’re starting a program where you can get the ebook edition of a participating book bundled with the print edition of the book for an extra $2.99 or less.  It’s called Matchbook, and I’m happy to announce that all of my novels will be in the program!  They’ll be priced at either $1.99 or $.99, so if you’re looking for a Christmas gift, you can buy one of my print books and get the ebook for yourself for more than 50% of the price.  The Star Wanderers books, when I have the print versions up (and I’m working on that now), will bundle the ebooks for free!

So yeah, that’s what’s been taking away from my blogging time.  Salt Lake Comic Con was also pretty cool–it was my first Comic Con experience, so I should probably blog about that too.  Also, some book reviews, some stuff that exploded on the internet recently that I want to react to … yeah, I’ve fallen a bit behind.

But above and beyond all this blogging / typesetting / publishing stuff, writing is still my #1 priority.  I started the first Sons of the Starfarers novella just last week, and have been working on it a little every day since.  I’m way excited about this next project–it’s going to be amazing!  Like a spinoff of Star Wanderers, but sooo much more.  But I’ll wait until tuesday to talk about that.

In the meantime, keep an eye out for the print edition of Stars of Blood and Glory!  It should be out in the next week or so.  And as for Star Wanderers, the print editions should be coming out this month or next, depending on how effectively (or not) I can manage this typesetting addiction.

Later!

Trope Tuesday: Forbidden Zone

For the next few Trope Tuesday posts, I’m going to pick apart some of the tropes I’m playing with in my latest WIP, Sons of the Starfarers.  One of the things I love to do when brainstorming a new story is to use tvtropes like a menu, finding the tropes that best fit my story ideas and combining them with other tropes to get even more ideas.

It’s not often hard to spot the forbidden zone in a fantastical world.  Perhaps it has an ominous name (bonus points if it has the word “doom” in it), or perhaps there’s some sort of sign saying “do not enter.” Either way, this is definitely a place where no one goes, and no one is supposed to go.

Of course, you can pretty much guarantee that the main characters are going to go there.  It’s like the forbidden fruit: the very fact that it’s off limits makes it more alluring.  If genre blindness is in effect, someone will probably make the mistake of saying “what could possibly go wrong?

There are many reasons why the zone may be forbidden.  Perhaps it’s a death world, where the characters will soon find themselves running for their lives.  Perhaps it’s not quite so dangerous, but once you go, you can never come back.  Or perhaps all the warnings were lies, and the so-called forbidden zone is actually the place that the characters needed to get to all along.  If that’s the case, then the mentor was probably a broken pedestal or the Svengali.

In any case, the forbidden zone definitely lies in the realm of adventure.  Depending on how soon or how late in the story the characters go there, it may lie just on the other side of the threshold, at the bottom of the belly of the whale, or at the very heart of the character’s nadir.

The Mines of Moria, the Toxic Jungle, Area 51, the Elephant Graveyard, and the Fire Swamp are all classic examples.  In C.S. Lewis’s Space Trilogy, Earth itself is a forbidden zone to all the other inhabitants of the solar system, which is why it’s called the silent planet.

In real life, there are plenty of these as well.  Just look at the DMZ on the Korean Peninsula, or the fallout zone around Chernobyl.  When I was living in Georgia, Abkhazia was off limits to the TLG volunteers, meaning that if you went there (and the Ministry of Education found out about it) it was grounds for immediate firing.  Of course, that only encouraged some of my TLG friends to go there even more–remember the forbidden fruit?  Others waited until their contracts were over and practically made a tour of the many forbidden zones of the Caucasus, including Nagorny Karabakh, which one friend described as safer than Philadelphia.

I’ve toyed with this trope in my own work, but never too explicitly.  The best example is probably the alien ghost ship from Genesis Earth.  It’s not exactly forbidden, since there’s no one around to tell Mike not to go there, but Terra definitely doesn’t want him to go.  Earlier in the same book, she forbids him from entering her workspace in the observatory, which leads to some complications and a major reveal when he inevitably does.  In the Gaia Nova series, the Outer Reaches qualify as a forbidden zone, since the only people who live out there are murderous barbarians like the Hameji.

In my new series, Sons of the Starfarers, the first book starts out with a forbidden zone–a derelict space colony, where everyone has died of an unknown cause.  Since the nearest settlement is light-years away (and because Aaron is perhaps too curious for his own good), that’s where Isaac and Aaron go.  What they find there propels the rest of the book–and quite possibly the rest of the series.

Check back next week for more!

Things I’ve learned from STAR WANDERERS

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When I published the first couple installments of Star Wanderers, it represented both an experiment with a new publishing format and a departure from the more long-form styles that I was used to.  Now, a little over a year later, I can say it’s been a success.  The series isn’t finished, and I’m still learning as I go, but here are some of the big lessons that I’ve picked up:

Novellas are surprisingly well-suited to series. They read fairly quickly, contain enough focus to sustain an episode of a larger story, and yet at the same time contain enough space to develop a wider arc.  Plus, they are a lot quicker to write than novels and generally don’t require as much editing, since it’s easier to get the story right on the first pass.  This means that you can put out novellas faster and more regularly than long-form novels, maintaining good momentum for the series as a whole.

It’s hard to write anything shorter than a novella without leaving readers unsatisfied.  By far the biggest criticism I’ve received for Outworlder (which is really more of a novelette than a novella) is that the story feels too short.  If the novella (17,500 to 40,000 words, or 80 to 150 pages) has all the benefits of the novel and the short story, then it seems that the novelette (7,500 to 17,500 words, or 30 to 80 pages) has all of the drawbacks.  Then again, it could just be that I have yet to master the form.

The satisfying element in a series is at least as important as the returnable element.  Every successful episodic story has some sort of returnable element–something about the story that makes the audience ravenous for more.  Often, this takes the form of a cliffhanger, leaving something unresolved.  However, it’s not enough just to string readers along, holding back whatever your story has promised them.  In every installment, you have to deliver.

It’s a delicate balance, to be sure, but the advantage of erring on the side of satisfaction is that the satisfaction can actually become a major hook in itself.  If readers know that they’re going to be satisfied whenever they pick up one of your books, you don’t have to ratchet up the tension to eleven in order to keep them coming back.  Several Star Wanderers reviews mention that it’s more relaxing and not as fast paced as other space opera, but sales of parts III through VI are almost 1:1.

Readers love to revisit a good story from another character’s point of view.  Some of the most glowing reviews I’ve received for this series are for Dreamweaver, which is basically a parallel novella to Outworlder but from Noemi’s point of view.  In Outworlder’s Amazon also-boughts, it sometimes even appears ahead of Homeworld, which actually comes before it in the series order.  This tells me that readers love to revisit a story, or to hear the same story again but from a different point of view.  Head-hopping from episode to episode can be a great way to add variety and depth.

Plenty of readers are willing to pay $2.99 per book for a series they enjoy.  When I published the omnibus for Star Wanderers I-IV, I wondered if sales of the individual novellas would taper off since I priced the omnibus much lower than their sum.  To my surprise, sales for both the omnibus and the individual installments have actually remained about even.  Since the omnibus clearly shows up on Amazon’s recommendations, this tells me that $2.99 is not too high of a price, even for a novella.

Perma-free works; however, free and $.99 attract some bad apples.  Do not underestimate the power of free, especially perma-free for the first book in a series.  I credit that strategy for at least 90% of the Star Wanderers sales, since the series itself has boosted my total sales numbers by more than an order of magnitude.  However, there are people out there who never fail to find something to complain about.  These are usually the same people who don’t like to pay for anything, and when they realize that the rest of my series is not free, they tend to leave unhelpful and/or incomprehensible reviews.

I priced Fidelity at $.99 to try to give readers more of a hook from part I to part II, but the sales ratio between part II (Fidelity) and part III is about 2.5:1–in other words, pretty bad.  Judging from some of the reviews, it seems that a fair number of the people who are dropping out are the bad apples.  I haven’t decided whether to raise the price, but if things keep going the way they have been, I probably will.

Series don’t usually take off until the third or fourth installment.  Do you know how many sales Outworlder had in the month when I first published it?  About 10–and that was actually a surprise.  When I published Fidelity, I had even fewer, and Sacrifice hardly sold anything until Outworlder went perma-free.  When it did, sales of the other two novellas picked up, but it wasn’t until after I’d published Dreamweaver that the sales of Fidelity started hitting triple digits.  The lesson to me is clear: it takes time for a series to pick up steam, so don’t be like Fox.  Give it a chance to grow.

Nothing sells a book like writing and publishing more books.  This is probably the main driving factor behind the last point.  I’ve done almost no promotion for Star Wanderers, other than putting out new books on a fairly consistent basis.  Amazon’s algorithms have probably done their part (sales on other outlets haven’t been growing nearly as much), but at the end of the day, there is no substitute to writing more and better books.  Any sort of promotional or marketing activity that takes away from my writing time is just not worth it–not when I’ve got stories to tell.

Right now, I’m getting ready to start a new spin-off series, which hopefully will be even more successful.  I’ll to try out a few new things (mostly along the lines of better covers and meatier novellas), but mostly, I’m going to try to replicate the success I’ve achieved with Star Wanderers by keeping these lessons in mind.  I have no idea how this new series is going to go, but I figure I know enough about the publishing side now that I can focus my attention on writing an awesome story, which is the most important thing after all.

Back in Provo!

Wow, do pageviews drop off sharply if you don’t blog for a while.

So after spending the last couple of weeks visiting family across the country–literally across the country, from Massachusetts to Iowa–I’m back here in good old Provo, Utah, surrounded by the mountains once again (I can just hear my grandma … “what’s so great about a pile of rocks?”).

Here were some of the highlights:

  • Seeing my parents (yay!) and spending some quality time with them.
  • Babysitting my niece and nephews and spending time with that side of the family.
  • Beach bumming on the Cape Cod National Seashore.
  • Eating fried clams and lobster in Wellfleet at Moby Dick’s.
  • Playing Shanghai with my parents every night for a week and a half.
  • Beating my brother-in-law at Settlers of Catan for the first time (he’s good!).
  • Watching the entire Ken Burn’s Civil War documentary series.
  • Touring Nauset Light and the Three Sisters.
  • Touring the Cape Cod Potato Chip factory.
  • Hanging out with Mom in Downtown Hyannis.
  • Acquiring an awesome new Indiana Jones style hat.
  • Going to church with a bunch of high priests sporting crocs.
  • Picking Monsanto corn and getting the whole corn experience.
  • Browsing a bookshelf of Ursula K. Le Guin novels I’ve never read.
  • Getting a bunch of awesome new story ideas (see previous post).
  • Taking the California Zephyr across the country–twice!

So yeah, it was a pretty awesome summer vacation.  It’s good to be back in Utah, though.  As much as I have a love/hate relationship with Provo, Utah really is my favorite place on Earth.

I’ve only been back a couple of hours, but it seems that it’s been an eventful two weeks since I’ve been gone.  One of my former roommates ran off without paying his share of the utilities, after jacking up the AC all summer (lovely).  After filing a police report, however, we may be able to get some of that back.

My tomatoes have been growing like CRAZY.  Only one has been harvested, but there are dozens hanging off of the vines.  Anybody want to make salsa?

As far as church goes, the ward boundaries have been completely rearranged.  Seriously, the map looks like a shredder went to it.  On our block, it’s us and the house two doors down from us (we think), then one of the apartments from Liberty Square, then another random house a block north of us.  Crazy.

I don’t know yet if I’ll be sticking around in my current place for the fall or not.  It’s a good situation, and the roommates are great, but the neighborhood is full of freshmen and sophomore college students.  I need to find some more people my age to hang out with.  Next month marks the beginning of the final year of my twenties, and I plan to make it count.

I got a lot of work done on Star Wanderers: Reproach (Part VII) while traveling on the train, but I still need some of my first readers to give it another read-through before I’m confident enough to publish it.  Hopefully, that shouldn’t take too long–I’m shooting for publication before the end of September.  Also, the print edition of Stars of Blood and Glory will hopefully be finalized before the end of the month as well.

That’s just about it for now.  I’ll leave you with some folk music from the Caucasus Mountains, this time on the accordion:

Rousing stuff.  I wish I could play the accordion like that.

Take care!