- I passed 10% of the revised AI draft for The Soulbond and the Sling (about 16k words).
- I started working on Bloodfire Legacy again, making some progress on the human draft.
- I made the covers for Thanks for Reading! my forthcoming compilation of author’s notes.
- I wrote the book description for Thanks for Reading!
- I ran a promotion for Genesis Earth.
Category: The Soulbond and the Sling
Should I split my epic fantasy series into two trilogies?
So I’m working on the first book in a new epic fantasy series, called the Soulbound King. It’s basically a fantasy retelling of the life of King David, loosely adapted from the biblical stories about his life. I’ve already outlined the first book and generated a rough AI draft, which came in at 153k words. The final draft will likely be longer than that, but I think it’s very likely that I will be ready to publish it before the end of the year.
The question I’m currently grappling with is whether to keep it as a seven book series, or to release it as two trilogies with a bridge novel in the middle. Frank Herbert did a similar thing with his Dune books: the first three books (Dune, Dune Messiah, and Children of Dune) were a trilogy, and the next book, God Emperor of Dune, was supposed to be a bridge novel setting up the second trilogy—except he died before finishing the last book, so his son Brian Herbert got together with Kevin J. Anderson to write it, and then they blew it up into a franchise… point being, stuff like this has been done before.
Now, I’m reasonably confident that I’m not going to die before finishing the last book. In fact, I’ve already made a 7-point outline for all seven books, so I know exactly where they start and end, with the inciting incident, midpoint, climax, etc. I’m also writing these books with AI assistance, which is making it possible for me to write these books much faster than I otherwise would have been able to write them. For the first book, The Soulbond and the Sling, I anticipate that it will only take between six to nine months of total work to go from story idea to finished draft.
But the trouble with writing a seven book epic fantasy series is that a lot of readers aren’t going to bother picking it up until all seven books are out. This is because so many readers have been burned by authors like George R.R. Martin and Patrick Rothfuss, who have not and likely will never finish their bestselling series. I can’t really blame the readers for that (though I can and do blame the authors), but it creates a market reality that I need to anticipate and plan for.
So here’s what I’m thinking: instead of making it a seven book series, I’ll make it two trilogies with a bridge novel in-between. The first three books will complete one arc, and the last three books will complete another arc. I’ll wait to release the first book until after I’ve completed the AI draft of the third book, so that way I can release all of the books in the first trilogy within 1-3 months of each other. And after the first trilogy is complete, I’ll market it as a trilogy while working on the last four books, probably releasing each of those a year apart, as I finish them.
The reason I’m thinking about this now is because a strategy like this is going to influence how I write all of these books. If I’m going to split the series into two trilogies, the last thing I want to do is end the first trilogy on a cliffhangar. It has to hold together as a complete story, with only one or two loose threads. But since I’m still in the early writing stages of the first book, I still have enough room creatively to make that kind of adjustment. I just have to decide if that’s truly the plan.
By the way, the first trilogy ends with the fantasy equivalent of the Battle of Mount Gilboa, where the Saul and Jonathan characters die in an epic battle and the David character becomes king (I know that in the Bible, there was a gap of several years between those two events, but I’m combining them for purposes of this book). So it is a rather natural stopping place, even if it does end on a massive downer, followed by a false victory (the second trilogy begins with David and Bathsheba).
Anyways, what do you think of this plan? Does it sound like a good idea, or is there a compelling reason I haven’t thought of yet for why I shouldn’t do it?
Five things I did at work last week
This post is late because I was too busy yesterday with writing. The Soulbond and the Sling is coming along slower than I would like, but I’m making steady progress, and really excited about this project. I suspect it will end up being the longest book I have ever written.
Last week, I:
- Finalized the text for my next book release.
- Finalized the book description for The Soulbond and the Sling.
- Added some key details to the book’s magic system, clarifying the costs and adding some important visual elements.
- Wrote and scheduled an email newsletter.
- Finished the AI draft of the prologue, at 3,077 words.
Feel free to add your own!
Five things I did at work last week
- I generated a 153k word rough AI draft of a fantasy novel.
- I ran a free promotion for my title The Call of the Tide.
- I wrote and scheduled two email newsletters.
- I finished updating my paperbacks. They are all now available on my online store.
- I decided which book I plan to write and submit for the Ark Press America 2076 contest.
A slightly better cover mock-up
So I was playing around with ChatGPT this morning, and came up with a slightly better cover mock-up for The Soulbond and the Sling:

Still needs some work, but I’m on the free plan and only get three images every day. I’ll keep playing with it over the next week or so, maybe try out another AI image generator like Stable Diffusion. But at least I have a cover image now that I can add to my posts whenever I’m talking about this WIP.
The rough AI draft of The Soulbond and the Sling is complete!
So I just finished the rough AI draft of The Soulbond and the Sling, after nine days of outlining and prewriting, and five days of working with Sudowrite to generate it. The rough draft clocks in at 18 chapters (plus a prologue and an epilogue), 80 scenes, and 153,254 words. I used about 770,000 AI credits from start to finish, including for generating all of the characters and worldbuilding in addition to the text of the draft itself.
I have to say, I am really impressed with the incremental improvements over at Sudowrite, and with Claude 3.7, which was the AI model that I used to generate most of this book. I did try out Sudowrite’s new Muse model, but I wasn’t too impressed with it, at least for generating new chapters. For the in-chapter tools, such as guided write, expand, or rewrite, it’s probably fantastic, but with generating new chapters from my outline it just felt too much like it threw all my worldbuilding into a blender. Most likely I either had the creative setting set too high, or I gave it too many prompts.
But when I switched to Claude 3.7 (Sudowrite’s “Excellent” model), the results were amazing. I seriously felt less like I was writing the novel and more like I was reading it for the first time. There’s still a lot of work to be done, especially in the second half of the book, where many of the scenes strayed from the overall story structure, either forgetting things that had already happened or assuming things that hadn’t yet. There’s also quite a bit of worldbuilding that I would like to add in, and a handful of small hallucinations that need to be cut out, as well as a major change that I made in one of the characters and need to smooth out in other scenes… but overall, I found myself really enjoying this book, and was frankly surprised at how well it fleshed out the setting and characters, making them really stand out. It also added some really great dialogue that is probably going to make it to the final draft.
I was originally planning to lay this WIP aside while I switch to another project, but I think now the best course will be to work on the AI draft until I make it as good as I can. That way, I can tinker with the AI prompts while they are still fresh in my mind. Once I’ve gotten the AI draft as good as I can make it, I’ll lay it aside for awhile to let my subconscious work on the story, so that when I pick it up again, I’ll be better able to do an awesome human draft.
I would have added a mock-up for the book cover, but you would not believe how hard it is to get an AI image generator to give you a picture of David and Goliath that doesn’t have David holding a bow and arrow! Seriously—every time I prompt it for a fantasy illustration of David and Goliath, where Goliath is a giant horned monster, it shows David with a bow and arrow instead of a sling. It’s almost as bad as the strawberry problem! But let’s see if WordPress can do it…

Nope. Yet another AI image fail. I even specifically said he was wielding a balearic sling. Sigh.
Five things I did at work last week
I’ve been so busy, I almost forgot to do one of these posts! Here are my five bullets from last week, feel free to add your own in the comments:
- Wrote a detailed scene map for The Soulbond and the Sling. I estimate the novel will be 20 chapters, 80 scenes, and 110,000 words, though the word count estimate is probably low.
- Wrote seven-point outlines for the other six books in the series.
- Generated all of the characters and worldbuilding cards for The Soulbond and the Sling on Sudowrite.
- Wrote and sent an email newsletter.
- Conducted a monthly planning session.
Re: DOGE: Five things I accomplished at work last week
- I started and finished the rough AI draft of The Unknown Sea, at 54,330 words (cover reveal forthcoming).
- I published 14 titles from my backlist on Audible using Amazon’s AI narration system.
- I compiled ten years of author’s notes for an upcoming book release.
- I developed a magic system for a new fantasy series, where magical powers can only be unlocked through marriage between a man and a women who both have latent abilities.
- I workshopped the first three chapters of an unpublished WIP through my writing group, and used their feedback to start outlining my next WIP, a fantasy adaptation of David and Goliath (but with 100% more jackalopes).