Five things I did at work last week (and a question–wanna read a free e-arc?)

Things have been so busy around here that I forgot to do this on Monday! But here it is, just a day late.

Last week, I:

  • Wrote about 4k human words in Bloodfire Legacy,
  • Revised about 18k words in The Soulbond and the Sling,
  • Generated another 10k words for The Soulbond and the Sling,
  • Used AI to revise through another 56k words of The Soulbond and the Sling, and
  • Started the outline for the second book in the Rise of the Soulbound King Trilogy, The Soulbond and the Lady.

I am super excited about The Soulbond and the Sling, though I will not release it until the first three books are out. Maybe I’ll post the AI draft to my blog? I think it’s good enough that I can do that. Or maybe I’ll release a free e-arc or something. Still need to think that through–but I would really love to find a way to share this book with people, because it is really a lot of fun. Also, my most ambitious book to date. The final draft will probably clock in somewhere between 150k and 200k words–a solid epic fantasy. And that’s just the first book in the trilogy!

Anyhow, I will try to be better about posting this week, but I am really trying to make as much progress on this WIP over the summer as I can. When the fall comes around, things are going to be crazy busy insane, with our family moving back to Orem, my wife starting a new job, and having a new baby. I may not be able to do any more writing from September to the end of the year, so I’m trying to do as much now as I can!

Your taste in AI art can say a lot about you…

So a couple of weeks ago, my wife and I both got into the new trend of using chatgpt to convert photos and images into “studio Ghibli style.” We started with some pictures of ourselves…

We then tried out some of our wedding photos…

And then, we realized that we didn’t have to upload an actual picture–we could actually just tell chatgpt what we wanted it to make, and guide it through the creative process until it made what we were looking for.

On the free version, this is super difficult, because you only get like 3 image generations per day, and you often have to go through several iterations to get what you want.

But both of us have the paid version of chatgpt, me through my writing business, and my wife through her school. So over the last couple of weeks, we’ve been playing around with it quite a lot!

This is the direction I decided to take it…

… And this is the direction my wife decided to take it…

… Needless to say, you can tell a lot about someone by their taste in AI art!

Five things I did at work last week

Last week, I:

  • Generated 157,560 words to incorporate into The Soulbond and the Sling (I had a lot of Sudowrite credits that were expiring),
  • Revised or incorporated 38,113 AI generated words,
  • Did 21,111 words of human revisions,
  • Completed 25% of The Soulbond and the Sling, and
  • Published a new box set for the Sea Mage Cycle.

I haven’t been blogging a lot lately, but hopefully that’s going to change soon, as there are a lot of thoughts and updates that I ought to share.

Fantasy from A to Z: B is for Battles

One of the things about fantasy that I love the most are the epic battle scenes, where the good guys and the bad guys face off across the field of battle in a conflict that will determine the fate of everything they hold dear. My favorite scene in the Lord of the Rings movie trilogy is the ride of the Rohirrim, where Theoden comes to the aid of Gondor and gives his rousing speech before his men charge into the fray, shouting the battle cry “death!”

I feel like the big set-piece battles are more common in older fantasy, which drew a lot more from J.R.R. Tolkien and Robert E. Howard. Many of these older fantasy writers, including C.S. Lewis and Lord Dunsaney, were drawing from history as they told their stories and created their worlds—specifically, the old-fashioned understanding of history, where the things that mattered most were the clash of civilizations and the great men at the head of those civilizations. 

In some ways, it’s good that we’ve moved to a much more holistic view of history, but there really is something to be said about those battles where everything stood on the edge of a knife, and the course of the next thousand years was decided in a single day. When I read about the numerous times the Muslim invaders were turned back by the Theodosian land walls of Constantinople, it takes me back to the siege of Minas Tirith and the Battle of Pelennor Fields. When I rewatch the scene from Gettysburg where Lawrence Chamberlain leads the charge of the 20th Maine, it stirs something deep within me that, outside of historical military fiction, I have only ever found in fantasy.

Tolkien and Howard were both really great at writing epic battle scenes, but the best, in my opinion, is David Gemmell. His debut novel /Legend/ is one of the most soul-stirring depictions of war that I have ever read. More than anything else, it captures the deep sense of meaning, purpose, and love that comes from staring death and the face and deciding which things (or which people) are worth dying for. In the words of Mel Gibson from Braveheart: everybody dies, but not everybody really lives.

The military aspect of fantasy tends to appeal more to male readers, which is probably why it’s more common in old-fashioned fantasy. Some subgenres like grimdark have preserved it, but with the rise of subgenres like romantasy and the increasing gender divide within publishing, it’s been dying out (not the least because of all the other baggage that grimdark brings, which I will discuss in G is for Grimdark vs. Noblebright). 

Call me old-fashioned, but I much prefer the rousing battle scenes from Tolkien, Howard, and Gemmell to much of the stuff that is coming out today. Will the market swing back? If and when it does, I hope to be a part of that. I don’t always put epic battle scenes in my books, but when I do, those are the authors who inspire me.

Five things I did at work last week

Last week, I:

  • Wrote about 7k new human words, most of them in Bloodfire Legacy,
  • Did about 38k words of AI revisions, most of it in The Soulbond and the Sling,
  • Did about 10k words of human revisions, most of it also in The Soulbond and the Sling,
  • Wrote and sent an email newsletter, and
  • Started writing Fantasy from A to Z.

Fantasy from A to Z: A is for Archetypes

I love fantasy books. I love the sense of adventure and possibility that I feel from reading a good fantasy story. I love how the best ones transport me to worlds untainted and unpolluted by modernity, rich in their own history and culture. I especially love it when these worlds are populated with characters who I feel could be my friends, their stories told in such a way that I almost feel I know them better than I know myself. 

Every literary genre is defined by the primary emotions they are supposed to evoke in the reader. Thus, romance is all about the emotions associated with love and longing, horror is all about the emotions associated with fear and dread, mystery is all about the emotions associated with discovery and making sense of the world, etc. 

Fantasy and science fiction are the two major divisions of the speculative fiction genre. The way I like to think of them is like two sides of the same coin. Both are defined by the sense of wonder they evoke, but where science fiction tends to be oriented toward the future, fantasy is oriented toward the past. 

To me, this is the biggest thing that distinguishes fantasy from science fiction: the deep, almost nostalgic yearning for a long-forgotten past. This goes much deeper than superficial aesthetic details, such as the idea that if your story has trees, it must be fantasy, but if it has rivets it must be science fiction. Trees hearken back to a world before the modern era, when we lived much closer to the rhythms of nature. Rivets, on the other hand, hearken to a world utterly reshaped by human technology and engineering.

But if this is the case—if fantasy is all about a nostalgic yearning for a lost, pre-modern age—why does so much fantasy take place in a world that is not our own? Yes, if you read the lore for J.R.R. Tolkien’s Middle Earth and Robert E. Howard’s Hyborean age, you eventually learn that these worlds are supposed to be far ancient versions of Earth—but no one thinks or cares about that when they’re reading the stories. And these days, most fantasy worlds don’t even try to pretend that they have a connection with Earth. So how can they possibly channel that sense of nostalgic yearning?

Through archetypes.

“Type” is another word for symbol, and “arch-” is a prefix meaning the chief or principle thing. Thus, an “archetype” is the chief or principal symbol of a thing, such that every real-world example of that thing is a manifestation of its archetype. 

It’s kind of like the inverse of a stereotype. When we stereotype someone, we mentally categorize them based on superficial characteristics like race, gender, age, etc, purposefully ignoring the things that make them different from other people. We start broad and go narrow. Archetypes, on the other hand, start narrow and go broad. The archetype of a hero slaying a dragon can be taken to represent anything from confronting childhood trauma to overcoming a deep-seated addiction—or something completely different. 

The dragon starts off small, hatching from an egg, but if it is not slain when it is young and non-threatening, it grows into something huge and fearsome and almost impossible to slay. It also guards a horde of treasure, which can only be won by slaying it. Does that remind you of anything in your own life? If the story is told well enough, it should, because of how it points to certain universal truths. A problem that isn’t solved when it is small will often grow until it is almost impossible to solve. The greatest reward can often only be gained by doing the most difficult thing.

The best fantasy books use archetypes to evoke that sense of wonder that defines the genre—and because these archetypes are so timeless, they often evoke a sense of familiarity and nostalgia. In the best books, they also imbue the surface-level story with deep layers of meaning, making it a rewarding experience to come back and reread it again.

I love stories that are full of meaning. But in order to be truly meaningful, a book shouldn’t set out with a specific message in mind. Rather, the best books use well-constructed archetypes to resonate with the ideas that the author wants to explore—and often, the readers will draw conclusions that the author never consciously intended. To me, this is the hallmark of the best kind of fantasy book—and of archetypes done well.

Five things I did at work last week

Last week was kind of crazy. My in-laws were gone for half of it, and we did a deep clean on the house before they came back. We also did a whole lot of Easter stuff as a family, which was fun, but it kept us very busy (hence the near total lack of blogging). And finally, our two year-old son who has zero pain tolerance came down with hayfever and barely slept at all, which was much less fun. But in between all that, I managed to:

  • write about 17k human words in Bloodfire Legacy, passing the 60% mark on that WIP,
  • touch up the prologue and chapter one of The Soulbond and the Sling, about 10k words or 5% of that WIP,
  • generate a cover for Return of the Starborn Son,
  • plan out the chapters (ie blog posts) for Fantasy from A to Z, and
  • wrote and scheduled this blog post. 😛

Five things I did at work last week

Last week, I:

  • Passed 28% of the rough human draft of Bloodfire Legacy,
  • Generated new cover art for Star Wanderers and Children of the Starry Sea,
  • Reworked the book description for Stars of Blood and Glory,
  • Wrote and scheduled an email newsletter, and
  • Published my first collection of author’s notes: Thanks for Reading!