The Writing Philosophy of Madeleine L’Engle.

I just recently finished reading a book of quotes from Madeleine L’Engle. Her children’s book A Wrinkle In Time had a huge impact on me as a kid, and was influential in the development of my love of writing and of Science Fiction. I found this quote book at a BYU Bookstore sale a couple of years ago, and never really got around to reading it until now. However, now was the right time to read it, as I’m thinking more and more seriously about developing myself as a fiction writer.

700 words and a few rambling thoughts (as usual)

I got in 700 words tonight, and that puts my novel right around 52,000 words. But the thing is that I don’t even know if it’s half finished–in fact, I get the feeling that it isn’t. I know that Andy said that this isn’t something I should worry about in the first draft, but I’m not so sure. How long is a typical novel? At this rate, the final one could be somewhere between 120,000 and 150,000. Am I going to spend most of my rewriting time just cutting stuff out? I don’t know. I guess I’m just a really wordy guy; I sometimes have this problem when I’m talking with people in person as well.

The Forever War by Joe Haldeman — part two

One thing about this book that really stood out to me was how character driven it was. Correct me if I’m wrong, but Science Fiction thirty years ago was much less character driven than it is today. The lens of the main character was very thick in this story, and a lot of the time it reflected back on Mandella himself and his own thoughts and impressions of the things that happened to him. It was much less a story about space battles and society than on the immediate human impact of war. And unlike a lot of space adventure, it didn’t glorify it AT ALL. Neither did it censor or tone down the horror of it. You got to see the horror of it all–and sometimes the most horrifying thing was that Mandella could be so desensitized to the carnage and immorality.

The Forever War by Joe Haldeman — part one

I’m not going to lie, I really didn’t like this book when I first started it. In fact, after I got about 100 pages into it, I got disgusted and stopped reading it. But there were some things that just kept coming back into my mind, like the fascinating relativistic space battles and the basic premise: leaving the earth of the present for the earth of the future, only to find that the future isn’t all it’s cracked up to be and you can’t go home. After six months, these things bothered me so much that I decided to pick it up again and finish it, and I am VERY glad that I did!

1,302 words and a successful experiment

Between classes this morning, I was checking out the blogs I subscribe to and I read something really interesting about a correlation between creativity and exercise. I haven’t had time to read the original study yet, but I’ll browse over it when I get a chance. Basically, the study shows that Aerobic exercise increases creativity (not sure how they measured that) up to two hours after completing the exercise.

no time no time no time

Man, there is never enough time to do anything! The sun was setting yesterday before I had gotten to a point where I was ready to do homework–and even after two straight hours yesterday, I still had another four hours tonight (I HATE doing homework on Sunday, I wish I didn’t have to do it) and even then, not all of it is done! But, on a good note, I actually had fun writing a paper about Palestine-Israel, and that was encouraging. I would hate to go into a career where I hated the everyday work I had to do, so this is a sign to me that I wasn’t dead wrong to choose a major that required a lot of essay writing.

Citizen of the Galaxy by Robert A. Heinlein

I was browsing around in Pioneer Book about a week ago (and Pioneer Book is an awesome place to hang out if you like books–they’re used, but cheap, and it’s really fun just to go and get lost in there!) and I saw a few used Heinlein books for sale. I don’t know too much about anything in particular that he wrote, just that he’s known as one of the best Science Fiction writers of the last century and had a very strong influence on the genre, and so I decided to pick up one of his books to get a taste for his writing. I settled on Citizen of the Galaxy, for no particularly compelling reason except that it seemed a little bit more interesting from the back cover blurb.

It was definitely a good book! I read it very quickly and really loved it! This was one of those books that I would read between classes (and maybe for the first five minutes of class as well), while eating, while walking back to my apartment from on campus, etc.  Basically, any time I had free time.

The story takes place in the far future, when humanity has expanded to many worlds and has diplomatic contact with many alien races.  But because space is so large, all the worlds are only held together in a loose confederation.  Far away from Earth is the Sargony of Nine Worlds, where human trafficking is alive and well.  The main character, Thorby, is a boy who starts out as a slave–but he is bought and befriended by a beggar named Baslim.  However, Baslim is much more than a mere beggar, and there are many people from outside of the Sargony who would like to see slavery abolished.  Soon, Baslim is killed by the Sargony, and Thorby is forced onto the run.  He moves from place to place, among many different people, as he grows from a boy to man.  When he finally finds the true identity of Baslim–and his own true identity–he finds that it provides him an unlikely opportunity to fight the evil slave trade.  But it will require him to once again give up everything that he wants.

It was easy to read and very fast. In fact, it was surprisingly fast.  There were many scenes where I thought to myself “wow, this scene could really be fleshed out more!” The descriptions were minimal, and at times, days, months, and even years passed by in only a couple of pages.  Heinlein definitely wasn’t too wordy, but the things that he did describe and did explain were the important and interesting things.

I think a lot of this was due to the point of view.  It was 3rd person omniscient, like Frank Herbert’s Dune, except that it was even more detached than Herbert.  Herbert would get into the scene enough to give a detailed picture of everything, but for Heinlein, the important thing was the plot of the story–as well as some of the more interesting ideas he had.

One really interesting idea that he had was of a society of space traders that travel the frontiers of known space on long voyages, completely isolated from the rest of humanity, who over time form their own distinct culture and government.  Each ship is like its own country, with a very rigid social structure to keep the friction of long voyages from causing mutiny and disorder.  The onboard community is almost like a tribe of nomads where everyone plays a role.  Every few years, they come together in a giant gathering to intermarry and buy new ships to start new clans.

The way that Heinlein envisioned this society is truly fascinating–he took the conditions that existed on the frontier of the world that he created, combined it with the technology of space travel, and drew it to what he saw as the logical conclusions.  He then humanized it somewhat by telling a story within it.

He did this for more than just the Free Traders: he did it to one degree or another throughout the whole book.  And these ideas and concepts, combined with the story of Thorby’s rise from anonymity and the underworld, made the story really good.  It really got my imagination going, which in my opinion is a sign of greatness in any story.

Oh, and one more thing: one reason why I love reading these old sci fi stories is because it is ALWAYS funny when one of the characters pulls out a slide rule to do some math!  ALWAYS!!!  It happened only once in this story, but it made me LAUGH so hard!  You’ve gotta love old 60s sci fi!

grrrr…!

Ok, so real quick, I didn’t do any writing today. That was very annoying. The really annoying thing, though, was that it took nearly six or seven hours to do less than two hours of homework. That’s what happens when I hang out around the Arabic house–too many distractions. Not that it wasn’t all unpleasant. Got into some really interesting discussions with my Arab friends, Basseem and Yanal. But when I find myself getting sucked into an hour long discussion between my Arab friends and my roommate David over who is the better prophet (Joseph Smith or Mohammed), and I’m trying to read a really dense article on the Israeli-Palestinian conflict, I lose quite a bit of efficiency. Bah. I should have gone to the library!

But, things will be better because tomorrow we’re having a Quark writing party over at Jakeson’s and Gamila’s! Yay! I am very much looking forward to that! I really love having these get togethers; they can be very relaxing and enjoyable. The only problem is that I feel a bit guilty for not hosting one here. The problem, though, is that there are too many people coming in and out. Maybe if the weather weren’t so cold, we could just go outside or something. Maybe when it gets warmer.

Also, as a sort of unrelated side note, I went to an open house today on the Masters of Public Policy program here at BYU, and it really sounded interesting. Very interesting. As in there’s a greater than 50% chance that I’m going to do this. I need to sit down one of these days and ask myself “what are all the possible things I can do with a Poli Sci degree and fluency in Arabic?” and then write out a decision tree that I can use to formulate some idea of a plan for what I want to do. But as far as gut feelings go, this public policy program sounds really good.  It sounds like just the thing to shoot me in the general direction where I want to go. And it also means that I would have a little bit more time to get married before jumping into a vocation.  I know–I didn’t come to BYU to get married, not at all, but it is pretty important, and even though I probably worry about this more than I should, it is something I would like to figure out before I get too deep into a career.

Tomorrow will be crazy busy as usual, so here are some things I’d like to post about soon: review of Citizen of the Galaxy, review of The Forever War, some thoughts on L’Engle’s philosophies about writing, a pro/con post (or two) on doing writing as a career (from the limited perspective of a mere undergrad such as myself).

Oh, and one last thing. I noticed on this really awesome site that gives out free audiobooks that they have this artificial voice that generates a lot of the mp3 files.  I’m assuming that they have a program that can convert word documents / pdf’s into mp3s, which is really cool, especially because the artificial voice isn’t all that bad.  Does anyone know where I could get one of these dictation programs? It would be WAY convenient to just plug some of the readings from my classes into a computer program and have it generate an mp3 of the texts.

still here and still writing

So, I’ve gotten out of the habit every day of posting my word count progress, but just so you know, I’ve been doing it very regularly. After I decided to keep working on my novel and not put it on the back burner, I’ve been doing between 500 to 700 words a day.

It’s really great that my friend Steve is also a writer, because when I want to go write, I’ll get out of my apartment and go over to his house to write in his basement, where he usually writes. For some reason, I don’t really like writing in my apartment very much. My roommate usually plays Arabic and Circassian music (he is Circassian and VERY nationalistic, which is great because it’s given me some good ideas for some of my characters), and after dinner there are usually people coming in and out, or watching TV, or something else. Or maybe it’s too messy. I don’t know exactly what it is, but I prefer to get out of the apartment to write.

It’s really great at Steve’s house, because it’s this old house with a dimly lit basement and all kinds of weird stuff all over the place. Slightly mildewy (except not so much anymore), isolated down in the basement from everyone else who usually hangs out doing stuff in the TV room upstairs, and if I need a break I can hang out with my old roommates, which is ALWAYS fun! So it’s just a great place to get away to to write.

I’ve been reading a lot of major sci fi books recently, as a part of my self-education on the genre. I just finished The Forever War by Joe Haldeman just an hour ago–and holy cow! It was good! I’ll review it and Citizen of the Galaxy here in a little bit, after doing some homework. If I’m going to write Science Fiction, I want to become well informed on the genre, know what has been done before, what’s been done well, where it’s going right now, wha the cliches are, what the successful techniques are, etc. Plus, I want to just be a better writer in general, which means that I’ll be going outside of Science Fiction / Fantasy every once and a while. One of the books on my list is The Kite Runner, which I hear is really good. I’ll probably review that one here, too.

And where am I finding this time to read all these books? It’s pretty easy, actually. I started exercising recently, and I found that it’s really easy to read while you’re pedaling on one of those machine bikes. So using only an hour each day, I can hit two birds with one stone: get in some exercise and give myself some reading time. Plus, I walk around campus a lot now with my head buried in a book, and even though I probably look a little weird, I’m getting the hang of it. After a while, you even stop bumping into people.

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