{"id":8158,"date":"2013-03-12T00:16:23","date_gmt":"2013-03-12T07:16:23","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=8158"},"modified":"2013-03-12T00:16:23","modified_gmt":"2013-03-12T07:16:23","slug":"unstuck-again","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/unstuck-again\/","title":{"rendered":"Unstuck again"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>For the past few weeks, I&#8217;ve been kind of stuck on chapter 3 in <strong>Star Wanderers: Benefactor<\/strong>.\u00a0 This one is a parallel novella to <strong>Fidelity<\/strong>, from Jakob&#8217;s point of view.\u00a0 It&#8217;s been a lot of fun to write so far&#8211;Jakob struggles with a lot of the same issues I do, like self-reliance and independence vs. accepting help from others&#8211;but there was this one scene that just kind of knocked the momentum out of it for me.<\/p>\n<p>Well, I started out the day by rereading <strong>Fidelity<\/strong>.\u00a0 Actually, I started reading it yesterday right as I was falling asleep, and had some really weird dreams that I&#8217;ve since forgotten.\u00a0 After rereading <strong>Fidelity<\/strong>, I went to the Provo Library to write, and everything just sort of clicked.\u00a0 Finished the chapter today, and if all goes well, I&#8217;ll finish the first draft sometime this week or next.<\/p>\n<p>I think the thing that was blocking me was that I wasn&#8217;t as familiar with the story I was writing parallel to.\u00a0 Which is funny, because <strong>Benefactor<\/strong> has very little overlap with <strong>Fidelity<\/strong>, even in terms of plotting.\u00a0 This is Jakob&#8217;s story, and it&#8217;s very different from Jeremiah&#8217;s or Noemi&#8217;s.\u00a0 Even so, the nagging feeling that I was missing something really slowed me down.\u00a0 When you&#8217;re in a dark, empty room and can&#8217;t see anything, you&#8217;re not going to run across it even if you know there isn&#8217;t anything to trip on.<\/p>\n<p>###<\/p>\n<p>Just recently, I added some new book teasers to the back matter of the <strong>Star Wanderers<\/strong> ebooks.\u00a0 They look a little like this:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p align=\"CENTER\"><i>If you enjoyed <\/i><b><i>Star Wanderers: Outworlder<\/i><\/b><i>, be sure to check out Part II: <\/i><b><i>Fidelity<\/i>!<\/b><\/p>\n<p align=\"CENTER\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Star-Wanderers-Fidelity-Part-ebook\/dp\/B008UDGGXO\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-7661\" alt=\"Star Wanderers II (thumb)\" src=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/08\/Star-Wanderers-II-thumb1.jpg\" width=\"180\" height=\"240\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/08\/Star-Wanderers-II-thumb1.jpg 180w, https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/08\/Star-Wanderers-II-thumb1-105x140.jpg 105w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 180px) 100vw, 180px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p align=\"CENTER\">IS FIDELITY WORTH THE PRICE OF FREEDOM? CAN LOVE TAKE ROOT BEYOND THE STARS?<\/p>\n<p align=\"JUSTIFY\">Oriana Station: a bustling frontier settlement between the Outworlds and the Coreward Stars. A popular port-of-call for free traders and independent starfarers alike\u2014and the latest target in the aggressively expansionist plans of the Gaian Empire.<\/p>\n<p align=\"JUSTIFY\">Life was simple for Jeremiah and Noemi before they arrived. Though neither of them speak the same language, they&#8217;ve reached an understanding that goes beyond words. But when the colonial authorities make them into second-class citizens of a fractured empire, even that might not be enough.<\/p>\n<p align=\"JUSTIFY\">Their newfound friends in the immigrant community can only do so much. With Noemi and her people depending on him, Jeremiah must find a way back to the Outworlds\u2014before they lose everything that they came for.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>Each one has a teaser for the next one in the series, including <strong>Homeworld<\/strong> (for the as-yet unpublished <strong>Dreamweaver<\/strong>).\u00a0 Ideally, I&#8217;d like to put out a new <strong>Star Wanderers<\/strong> novella every month or two, but time things so that I can have the teaser for the next one ready before publishing the one previous.<\/p>\n<p>So far, the <strong>Star Wanderers<\/strong> series has been selling a lot better than anything else I&#8217;ve published.\u00a0 That&#8217;s great, because I really enjoy writing in this universe!\u00a0 The short novella length is perfect for exploring one or two characters in-depth over the course of a much more intimate story than you usually see in a novel.\u00a0 The really cool thing, though, is that the more I write in this universe, the more characters and storylines unfold.\u00a0 It&#8217;s like watching a flower bloom, where each individual petal is a single story.<\/p>\n<p>Anyhow.\u00a0 I&#8217;m really excited to keep writing in this series.\u00a0 Some of the stories I have kicking around in my head:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>A parallel novella to <strong>Sacrifice<\/strong>, primarily in Mariya&#8217;s point of view but also perhaps with a bit of Noemi.\u00a0 Basically, something exploring the subtext behind the polygamy that drove most of the conflict in <strong>Sacrifice<\/strong>.<\/li>\n<li>A parallel novella to <strong>Homeworld<\/strong>, from both Lucca&#8217;s and Mariya&#8217;s points of view.\u00a0 Basically, an adventure romance that actually shows the final battle<strong><\/strong> between Captain Helena and the colonists.\u00a0 In <strong>Homeworld<\/strong>, it didn&#8217;t make sense to show that battle since the story was about Jeremiah and Noemi, and both of them were plugged into a simulator at the time.\u00a0 But my first readers really want to read a story about the battle itself, so that&#8217;s one story I definitely have to write.<\/li>\n<li>A story from Master Korha&#8217;s point of view, showing the gradual collapse of Megiddo Station and the buildup to his decision to give his daughters away.\u00a0 This one is going to be more tragic, or at the very least, bittersweet.\u00a0 But hey, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=6501\" target=\"_blank\">I kinda like bittersweet endings<\/a>.<\/li>\n<li>A story from Samson&#8217;s point of view.\u00a0 Actually, I&#8217;ve already got this one plotted and ready to go.\u00a0 The only trouble is, well, it&#8217;s Samson.\u00a0 With his <a href=\"http:\/\/tvtropes.org\/pmwiki\/pmwiki.php\/Main\/EthicalSlut\" target=\"_blank\">ethical slut<\/a> mentality, whatever I write, my family is going to be scandalized by it (and I might be, too, when my kids are old enough to read it).\u00a0 Don&#8217;t worry, though&#8211;I&#8217;ll get around to it eventually.\u00a0 This isn&#8217;t a story that I can just walk away from.<\/li>\n<li>Something from Jakob&#8217;s sons&#8217; point of view, Isaac and Aaron.\u00a0 Except &#8230; I can&#8217;t really say much about this, because <strong>Benefactor<\/strong> isn&#8217;t out yet. o.0<\/li>\n<li>At some point, I&#8217;d like to write a full-length novel from the point of view of Jeremiah and Noemi&#8217;s kids.\u00a0 I don&#8217;t have a plot or anything else figured out for this one, but I&#8217;d really like to revisit their world again through their kids&#8217; eyes.\u00a0 I even have a title: <strong>Children of the Starry Sea<\/strong>.\u00a0 But yeah, that&#8217;s probably not going to come out for another couple of years or so.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>So yeah, those are some of the things kicking around in my mind.\u00a0 Once I finish the parallel novellas to <strong>Fidelity, Sacrifice,<\/strong> and <strong>Homeworld,<\/strong> anything is free game really.\u00a0 Is there any story in particular that you guys would like to see?\u00a0 Now&#8217;s the time to drop-kick my imagination&#8211;once it gets fixated on something, it won&#8217;t give me any rest until a story comes out the other end.<\/p>\n<p>And that&#8217;s enough for now.\u00a0 Tomorrow, <em>I promise<\/em>, I&#8217;ll do a Trope Tuesday post.\u00a0 I&#8217;ve got a job interview in the morning and probably won&#8217;t have work for the rest of the day, so while that kind of puts a cramp on my wallet, it means you&#8217;re more likely to get a blog post.\u00a0 In the meantime, I&#8217;d better get some sleep.<\/p>\n<p>Later!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>For the past few weeks, I&#8217;ve been kind of stuck on chapter 3 in Star Wanderers: Benefactor.\u00a0 This one is a parallel novella to Fidelity, from Jakob&#8217;s point of view.\u00a0 It&#8217;s been a lot of fun to write so far&#8211;Jakob struggles with a lot of the same issues I do, like self-reliance and independence vs.&hellip; 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