{"id":8146,"date":"2013-03-07T02:44:27","date_gmt":"2013-03-07T09:44:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=8146"},"modified":"2013-03-07T02:44:27","modified_gmt":"2013-03-07T09:44:27","slug":"well-that-was-a-quick-revision","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/well-that-was-a-quick-revision\/","title":{"rendered":"Well, that was a quick revision"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/03\/SW-V-Dreamweaver-thumb.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-8147\" alt=\"SW-V Dreamweaver (thumb)\" src=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/03\/SW-V-Dreamweaver-thumb.jpg\" width=\"180\" height=\"240\" \/><\/a>First of all, sorry for forgetting to do a Trope Tuesday post (again!).\u00a0 I guess I&#8217;m really flaky about doing those.\u00a0 Oh well&#8211;better to be flaky about blogging than flaky about writing, right?<\/p>\n<p>In fact, the reason I didn&#8217;t write-up the post was because I was busy doing a 2.0 revision pass for <strong>Star Wanderers: Dreamweaver.<\/strong>\u00a0 This is the novella that retells the events of <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/ganxy.com\/i\/75961\/joe-vasicek\/star-wanderers-outworlder\" target=\"_blank\">Outworlder<\/a>,<\/strong> but from Noemi&#8217;s point of view.\u00a0 I hadn&#8217;t looked at it in the eight months since I wrote it, but sometime over the summer I gave it to <a href=\"http:\/\/lachristensen.wordpress.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">Laura<\/a> to alpha read, and she just got back with her comments a couple of days ago.<\/p>\n<p>Well.\u00a0 Reading through those comments was simultaneously the most excruciating and most invigorating thing I&#8217;ve been through in a while.\u00a0 I&#8217;ve changed a lot since I wrote the first draft, and a lot of things about it are horribly embarrassing, but the story &#8230; the story is actually pretty solid.\u00a0 Oh, some of Noemi&#8217;s motivations weren&#8217;t close enough to the page, and some other elements needed a bit of pruning, but the structure, the bones&#8211;it all seems to be there.<\/p>\n<p>So, long story short: I got Laura&#8217;s comments on Monday, and finished the revisions today.\u00a0 TODAY.\u00a0 Of course, it still needs to be proofread, and I&#8217;d like to send the new version out to some other first readers &#8230; but I don&#8217;t anticipate making any major, earth-shattering changes to the story.\u00a0 In fact, I could publish it tomorrow, and most of you would probably love it.<\/p>\n<p>So far, my <strong>Star Wanderers<\/strong> books are selling much better than any of my other titles.\u00a0 They&#8217;re also much shorter, which means that I can put them out a lot faster&#8211;or should, at least.\u00a0 I probably angst over them more than I should, trying to make everything perfect.\u00a0 But I&#8217;ve got the extended series planned out to Part X, and I&#8217;ve already written half of Part VI.\u00a0 Some of those might get moved up or down, depending on demand, but the more I write in this universe, the more stories present themselves.\u00a0 And hey, if that&#8217;s what you want to read, I&#8217;ll be more than happy to write more of them.<\/p>\n<p>If all goes well, <strong>Dreamweaver<\/strong> will be out in the first half of April, perhaps as early as the end of March.\u00a0 As always, <a href=\"https:\/\/tinyletter.com\/jvasicek\" target=\"_blank\">newsletter subscribers<\/a> will get a two-week coupon code to download the book for free on Smashwords.\u00a0 This also provides access to all future editions, in all ebook formats, completely DRM free.\u00a0 If you enjoy it, I hope you&#8217;ll review it or tell a friend about it.\u00a0 I&#8217;m not sure how I&#8217;ll end up pricing it, but I don&#8217;t anticipate going higher than $2.99.<\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, here&#8217;s something to leave you with: an awesome remix of Jewel by Solarstone &amp; Clare Stagg.\u00a0 Man, I love Solarstone&#8217;s work.\u00a0 I picked up his newest album, Pure, over the summer, and have been pulling songs from it for book soundtracks ever since.<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/Dpsj9COhIws\" height=\"360\" width=\"640\" allowfullscreen=\"\" frameborder=\"0\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>Night! \ud83d\ude42<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>First of all, sorry for forgetting to do a Trope Tuesday post (again!).\u00a0 I guess I&#8217;m really flaky about doing those.\u00a0 Oh well&#8211;better to be flaky about blogging than flaky about writing, right? In fact, the reason I didn&#8217;t write-up the post was because I was busy doing a 2.0 revision pass for Star Wanderers:&hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/well-that-was-a-quick-revision\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Well, that was a quick revision<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"Good news! 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