{"id":7590,"date":"2012-07-26T14:15:15","date_gmt":"2012-07-26T19:15:15","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=7590"},"modified":"2012-07-26T14:18:01","modified_gmt":"2012-07-26T19:18:01","slug":"stars-of-blood-and-glory-2-0-is-finished","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/stars-of-blood-and-glory-2-0-is-finished\/","title":{"rendered":"Stars of Blood and Glory 2.0 is finished!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>On Tuesday, I finished the second draft of my latest writing project,\u00a0<strong>Stars of Blood and\u00a0<\/strong><strong>Glory!<\/strong> \u00a0Here are the basic stats:<\/p>\n<p><strong>words:<\/strong> 78,746<br \/>\n<strong>pages:<\/strong> 372<br \/>\n<strong>chapters:\u00a0<\/strong>20, epilogue, and prologue<br \/>\n<strong>start date:<\/strong> 3 July 2012<br \/>\n<strong>end date:<\/strong> 24 July 2012<\/p>\n<p>Also, this is probably really dorky, but I made a logo for the title:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/SBG-logo.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-7591\" title=\"SBG logo\" src=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/SBG-logo.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"500\" height=\"375\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/SBG-logo.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/SBG-logo-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/SBG-logo-140x105.jpg 140w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>They say to use only Courier or Times New Roman in your manuscript, but whatever. \u00a0I think it looks pretty cool.<\/p>\n<p>This was a lightning-fast revision, compared with the ones I did for\u00a0<strong>Bringing Stella Home<\/strong> and\u00a0<strong>Desert Stars<\/strong>. \u00a0Part of that is because I want to try and follow <a href=\"http:\/\/www.deanwesleysmith.com\/?p=5245\" target=\"_blank\">Heinlein&#8217;s rules<\/a> more closely. \u00a0I recently looked back at how I&#8217;ve spent my writing time over the past three years, and found out that as much as 3\/4ths of it was tied up in revisions, not in producing new material. \u00a0Yeah&#8230;that&#8217;s something that needs to change.<\/p>\n<p>For this draft, I resisted the urge to do a line-by-line edit, and instead focused on rearranging the scenes in their proper order and inserting new ones that were essential to the story but missing from the first draft. \u00a0That&#8217;s probably why it only took three weeks to finish.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t think there are any glaring holes in the story, but if my first readers find any, I&#8217;ll probably do another scene rearranging draft much like this one. \u00a0If they give me the green light, though, I&#8217;ll do a quick pass to fix any errors and send it off to my editor to start the publication process.<\/p>\n<p>Two things about Stars of Blood and Glory\u00a0have really surprised me: first, how little time it&#8217;s taken to write it (two months for the first draft, a little less than one for this one), and second, how short it is. \u00a0Even with five viewpoint characters, it&#8217;s less than 80k (<strong>Bringing Stella Home<\/strong> was 110k). \u00a0The pacing feels right, though, so that&#8217;s probably its natural length&#8211;it&#8217;s just that I seem to be writing shorter and shorter novels lately instead of longer ones. \u00a0Maybe it has something to do with all those David Gemmell novels I love to read.<\/p>\n<p>There&#8217;s more I could say, but I don&#8217;t want to bore you guys too much. \u00a0Besides, you probably want me to move on to the next one.<\/p>\n<p>My next writing project is\u00a0<strong>Star Wanderers: Part II<\/strong>, which should take me about a week to revise and another week or two to finalize and publish. \u00a0If any of you want to help me proofread the final draft, let me know&#8211;I&#8217;m willing to exchange services and\/or give you a free copy.<\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, I&#8217;d better get back to writing.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>On Tuesday, I finished the second draft of my latest writing project,\u00a0Stars of Blood and\u00a0Glory! \u00a0Here are the basic stats: words: 78,746 pages: 372 chapters:\u00a020, epilogue, and prologue start date: 3 July 2012 end date: 24 July 2012 Also, this is probably really dorky, but I made a logo for the title: They say to&hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/stars-of-blood-and-glory-2-0-is-finished\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Stars of Blood and Glory 2.0 is finished!<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[68,44,857,569],"tags":[223,46,733,156],"class_list":["post-7590","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-bsh","category-ds","category-sw","category-sbg","tag-finishing","tag-goals-and-plans","tag-heinleins-rules","tag-revising","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-1Yq","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7590","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=7590"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7590\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":7594,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7590\/revisions\/7594"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=7590"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=7590"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=7590"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}