{"id":72,"date":"2007-11-10T03:18:28","date_gmt":"2007-11-10T09:18:28","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=72"},"modified":"2007-11-10T03:18:28","modified_gmt":"2007-11-10T09:18:28","slug":"some-light-revision","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/some-light-revision\/","title":{"rendered":"Some light revision"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Didn&#8217;t write much today.\u00a0 Just revised what I wrote yesterday a little bit.\u00a0 I listened to some dark punk rock music to put me in the mood to write out this one really dark scene, and it worked pretty well&#8211;except that I was writing more out of my feelings than out of my rational thoughts.\u00a0 As I was exercising today, the thought came to mind that one part would make better sense if I changed what was happening in that section.\u00a0 Specifically, I&#8217;d left out some of the details of the physics of spaceflight, and how that would logically affect the characters in that scene.\u00a0 Instead of having all the refugees huddled down in a storage room with big boxes everywhere, I had them all crammed into rooms with tight seats and harnesses to keep them from falling everywhere in the acceleration from Earth or the zero gravity of orbit.\u00a0 Yeah.<\/p>\n<p>Man, I am TIRED.\u00a0 And tmorow is the AML convention&#8230;..must&#8230;sleep.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Didn&#8217;t write much today.\u00a0 Just revised what I wrote yesterday a little bit.\u00a0 I listened to some dark punk rock music to put me in the mood to write out this one really dark scene, and it worked pretty well&#8211;except that I was writing more out of my feelings than out of my rational thoughts.\u00a0&hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/some-light-revision\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Some light revision<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[],"tags":[4],"class_list":["post-72","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","tag-the-lost-colony","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-1a","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/72","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=72"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/72\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=72"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=72"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=72"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}