{"id":5504,"date":"2011-07-18T11:21:13","date_gmt":"2011-07-18T17:21:13","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=5504"},"modified":"2011-07-18T17:42:30","modified_gmt":"2011-07-18T23:42:30","slug":"desert-stars-3-0-is-finished","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/desert-stars-3-0-is-finished\/","title":{"rendered":"Desert Stars 3.0 is finished!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>That&#8217;s right; after almost exactly two months of writing, the third draft of <em>Desert Stars<\/em> is now complete!<\/p>\n<p>This is the first draft where I feel that things are truly coming together the way they should be, where the story is transforming into something that not only works, but is actually fairly awesome. I&#8217;m probably not the best judge, though, so I&#8217;ll have to send it out to another round of first readers to get their reactions to it, but I don&#8217;t think this will need more than one more draft before it&#8217;s ready to go to a copy editor.<\/p>\n<p>Anyhow, here are the stats:<\/p>\n<p><strong>ms pages:<\/strong> 505<br \/>\n<strong>words:<\/strong> 108,468<br \/>\n<strong>file size:<\/strong> 246 KB<br \/>\n<strong>chapters:<\/strong> 22, prologue &amp; epilogue<br \/>\n<strong>start date:<\/strong> 16 May 2011<br \/>\n<strong>end date:<\/strong> 18 Jul 2011<\/p>\n<p>And the Wordle:<\/p>\n<p><a title=\"Wordle: Desert Stars 3.0\" href=\"http:\/\/www.wordle.net\/show\/wrdl\/3853728\/Desert_Stars_3.0\"><img decoding=\"async\" style=\"padding: 4px; border: 1px solid #ddd;\" src=\"http:\/\/www.wordle.net\/thumb\/wrdl\/3853728\/Desert_Stars_3.0\" alt=\"Wordle: Desert Stars 3.0\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>The most influential song in the writing of this draft comes from an mp3 cd of Arabic music that a friend in Jordan gave me while I was studying over there in 2008. The title is \u0641\u0631\u062d\u0629 \u0639\u0645\u0631\u0627\u0646\u0629 \u0628\u0627\u0644\u062f\u0627\u0631, which apparently translates to &#8220;The Joy of _____ in Casablanca.&#8221; I know absolutely nothing else about it, other than it sounds very Arab. Since <em>Desert Stars<\/em> is essentially about a far-future Arab society, it resonated quite well.<\/p>\n<p><center><iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/4u7QXOU1EC4\" frameborder=\"0\" width=\"425\" height=\"349\"><\/iframe><\/center><\/p>\n<p>The hardest part of writing this draft was probably at the very end, when my daily routine fell to pieces and I completely lost my stride. This seems to happen a lot whenever I&#8217;m trying to finish something, which reflects in my daily word count charts.<\/p>\n<p>But the ending itself was not particularly hard to write; in fact, it was quite fun. A bunch of previous changes came together in a way that just clicked, including some spontaneous ones that I hadn&#8217;t planned for at all. As a result, I&#8217;m really excited about this draft and hope to get it out as an ebook before Christmas.<\/p>\n<p>One question, for those of you who have read the previous draft: do you think I could justify splitting the story into two separate novels and selling them each at a lower cost? I hate books that end on a cliffhanger, but one of my first readers thought that this might work, and it would certainly give me more stuff to epublish.<\/p>\n<p>Also, if you haven&#8217;t read a previous draft and would like to be a first reader, please let me know. I only send my rough work out to people I know in real life, however, so if our only interaction has been online, please don&#8217;t ask. I&#8217;ll probably start the fourth draft sometime in September, so you&#8217;ll have until the end of the summer (and possibly a little more) to finish it.<\/p>\n<p>Next project? Publishing <em>Bringing Stella Home<\/em> and putting together the spin-off novella <em>Sholpan.<\/em> Shouldn&#8217;t take more than a couple weeks. After that, I think I&#8217;ll start the indirect sequel that <a href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=5394\">I mentioned before<\/a>. In the meantime, on with business as usual.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>That&#8217;s right; after almost exactly two months of writing, the third draft of Desert Stars is now complete! This is the first draft where I feel that things are truly coming together the way they should be, where the story is transforming into something that not only works, but is actually fairly awesome. I&#8217;m probably&hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/desert-stars-3-0-is-finished\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Desert Stars 3.0 is finished!<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[68,32,541,569],"tags":[391,223,158,42,529,147,150,199,156,440,149,63,204],"class_list":["post-5504","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-bsh","category-ge","category-sholpan-novella","category-sbg","tag-arabs","tag-finishing","tag-first-readers","tag-frustrations","tag-indie-publishing","tag-momentum","tag-music","tag-questions","tag-revising","tag-sequels","tag-the-middle-east","tag-triumphs","tag-wordle","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-1qM","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5504","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=5504"}],"version-history":[{"count":10,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5504\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":5516,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5504\/revisions\/5516"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=5504"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=5504"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=5504"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}