{"id":4078,"date":"2011-02-01T02:45:27","date_gmt":"2011-02-01T09:45:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=4078"},"modified":"2011-02-04T10:05:22","modified_gmt":"2011-02-04T17:05:22","slug":"looking-for-alpha-readers-and-planning-the-next-project","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/looking-for-alpha-readers-and-planning-the-next-project\/","title":{"rendered":"Looking for alpha readers and planning the next project"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><em>Worlds Away from Home<\/em> <em>2.1<\/em> is going along well.\u00a0 I had a hard time switching from <em>Bringing Stella Home<\/em> back to this other project, but I&#8217;ve got some good momentum going and assuming no major interruptions, should be able to do about 3k words a day for the rest of the week.<\/p>\n<p>Then again, if I get interrupted by work, that might be a good thing&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>The second draft is going to be pretty rough, but good enough to start sending out to alpha readers.\u00a0 Anyone want to volunteer?\u00a0 It&#8217;s basically a far future love story on a planet with desert-dwelling tribal nomads who drive micronuclear powered dune buggies and centuries-old arcologies under giant continent-sized domes.\u00a0 Earth is an ancient, mythical legend, and roving bands of starfaring nomads stand poised to crush the galactic empire.<\/p>\n<p>I hope to be finished with the second draft by March 1st, and I&#8217;d want to get feedback no later than the end of April.\u00a0 If you&#8217;ve been one of my alpha readers before, or if we&#8217;re friends IRL, let me know if you&#8217;re interested.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/02\/23mar09.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-medium wp-image-4082\" title=\"23mar09\" src=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/02\/23mar09-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/02\/23mar09-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/02\/23mar09.jpg 500w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>So earlier today, I was thinking about the project I want to do after WAFH&#8211;a sequel to <em>Genesis Earth<\/em>.\u00a0 I&#8217;ve been toying with the idea of releasing GE as an ebook, but I don&#8217;t want to do that until I have a sequel in the works.\u00a0 Anyhow, I was thinking of ideas for the title, and out of the blue, it struck me:<\/p>\n<p>EDENFALL.<\/p>\n<p>Kind of plays on the subtle Adam and Eve theme of the first one (and no, <em>Genesis Earth<\/em> isn&#8217;t <em>technically<\/em> a sci-fi Adam and Eve story&#8230;but it kind of evokes one).\u00a0 I like it because it fits well with my ideas for the story, which basically center around shattering the Edenic paradise that Michael and Terra reach at the end of GE.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve got a lot of ideas for this book, and I think they&#8217;re reaching a critical mass.\u00a0 Just last month, I came up with a great name for the main female protagonist: Estee.\u00a0 She&#8217;s the eldest daughter of Terra and Michael, and kind of takes after her mother&#8217;s personality.\u00a0 The male protagonist will be a young soldier from the military force sent out by panicky Earth officials to neutralize any threat on Icaria&#8211;which gives the commanders of the expedition a broad mandate to do whatever the hell they want.  As you can imagine, conflict ensues.<\/p>\n<p>I know how this story begins, and I know how it&#8217;s supposed to end (and thereby set things up for an awesome third book in the trilogy), but I have no idea how to build things up to the crazy twist ending.\u00a0 It&#8217;s going to require some serious worldbuilding, and that&#8217;s going to take some time.\u00a0 Daydreaming is such hard work, after all.<\/p>\n<p>Anyhow, I should be ready by the time I finish WAFH 2.1.\u00a0 As an experiment, I&#8217;m going to write the rough draft entirely in longhand.\u00a0 Am I crazy?\u00a0 Perhaps.\u00a0 But I also want to spend some time in the Utah wilderness for inspiration while I&#8217;m writing it, so pen and paper is probably the best medium for that.<\/p>\n<p>So those are my plans.\u00a0 To close, let me link to this awesome cover of &#8220;Something About Us&#8221; by Daft Punk.\u00a0 Now that&#8217;s some sweet theremin action&#8230;enjoy!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Worlds Away from Home 2.1 is going along well.\u00a0 I had a hard time switching from Bringing Stella Home back to this other project, but I&#8217;ve got some good momentum going and assuming no major interruptions, should be able to do about 3k words a day for the rest of the week. Then again, if&hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/looking-for-alpha-readers-and-planning-the-next-project\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Looking for alpha readers and planning the next project<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[44,509,32],"tags":[379,179,478,158,46,259,147,150,421,100,373],"class_list":["post-4078","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-ds","category-edenfall","category-ge","tag-beginnings","tag-character-names","tag-daft-punk","tag-first-readers","tag-goals-and-plans","tag-just-for-fun","tag-momentum","tag-music","tag-science-fiction-romance","tag-the-hameji","tag-titles","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-13M","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4078","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=4078"}],"version-history":[{"count":15,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4078\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":4124,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4078\/revisions\/4124"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=4078"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=4078"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=4078"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}