{"id":23348,"date":"2026-06-24T10:00:00","date_gmt":"2026-06-24T16:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=23348"},"modified":"2026-06-19T21:18:34","modified_gmt":"2026-06-20T03:18:34","slug":"wip-excerpt-the-unknown-sea-chapter-5","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wip-excerpt-the-unknown-sea-chapter-5\/","title":{"rendered":"WIP Excerpt: The Unknown Sea, Chapter 5"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I had a lot of fun with this chapter! It introduces the rival love interest for Celeste, the female main viewpoint character, right after the chapter that introduces her male counterpart&#8217;s rival love interest.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"500\" height=\"800\" src=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/05\/TUS-ebook-cover-500x800.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-23157\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/05\/TUS-ebook-cover-500x800.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/05\/TUS-ebook-cover-250x400.jpg 250w, https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/05\/TUS-ebook-cover-200x320.jpg 200w, https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/05\/TUS-ebook-cover.jpg 562w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" \/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The midday sun shone honey-thick, making sweat run down the back of Enoch\u2019s neck. He shaded his eyes with his hand, scanning the horizon for the land he\u2019d sensed the night before. It should be within sight soon\u2014after all, they\u2019d been sailing since dawn. Between him and Celeste, the <em>Waverunner<\/em> had cut a swift and steady pace through the placid waters. And yet, all he could see on the horizon was the haze.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cLand ho!\u201d Felix called from rigging, making his heart leap. \u201cDead ahead, Captain! Just like our sea mage said it would be!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The crew quickly gathered on the deck. The haze cleared a little, and sure enough, just over the bow, they could see it\u2014a thin, almost invisible line where the sea met the sky. For the first time since they\u2019d tumbled through the Maelstrom, Enoch saw glimmers of hope in the faces of his crewmates.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWell done, lad,\u201d Captain Black said quietly. \u201cYour magic proved true. Now, all we need is to find out where in the blazes we are.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">They spent the next hour skirting the coastline, keeping just far enough to avoid the breakers and reefs. The land itself rose from the placid sea in a series of rocky outcroppings and green-cloaked cliffs. It was a wild land, full of thick, untamed jungles and rugged heights. A warm breeze carried the scent of unfamiliar flowers and rich, fertile earth.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cCan you detect any sign of settlement?\u201d Thaddeus asked.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch closed his eyes and drew on his magical sight. In his mind\u2019s eye, the shoreline sharpened, details emerging from the hazy distance.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cNot yet,\u201d he said, though he sensed that the lands weren\u2019t totally uninhabited. \u201cJust cliffs and forest and\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">He stopped abruptly as his magical senses revealed a rock formation jutting into the sea. A sun-bronzed figure struggled there, small and alone against the forces of nature.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWhat is it?\u201d Thaddeus asked.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch focused his magic, sharpening his sight. \u201cThere\u2019s someone trapped on those rocks up ahead.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Maren quickly strode over to the railing. \u201cAre you certain?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cYes, Captain. I can\u2019t make out much, but\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cBut what, lad?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch\u2019s heart began to pound. The figure on the rocks was a beautiful young woman, with long, black hair and smooth, brown skin. She was chained in irons that bound her to the face of the jagged rock. Aside from those chains, she was completely unclothed&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cShe\u2019s in danger,\u201d he said quickly. \u201cThe tide\u2019s coming in\u2014she\u2019ll drown if we don\u2019t help her.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWhoa, there,\u201d Thaddeus warned. \u201cPirates use all sorts of lures. It could be a trap.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cFor who?\u201d Enoch argued. \u201cWe\u2019ve been following this coastline for nearly an hour, and in all that time we haven\u2019t seen a single ship, much less a settlement.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Thaddeus frowned, but the captain silenced him with a gesture. \u201cThe lad has a point, though I agree that caution is warranted. Can you detect anything strange or dangerous?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cYes,\u201d said Celeste as she joined them on the <em>Waverunner\u2019s<\/em> upper deck. \u201cI was just about to tell you, Captain. There\u2019s something in the water\u2014something large and hungry. I think it\u2019s coming for that girl.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWe have to save her,\u201d Enoch urged. \u201cLet me go, Captain. I can do it.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Captain Black studied him for a long moment, then nodded. \u201cAlright, lad. But I\u2019m sending Marcus with you. Thaddeus, bring us up just shy of those shoals.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cCaptain, you can\u2019t be serious,\u201d Thaddeus protested. \u201cIf there really is some sort of beast lurking in\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cMaster Ashenford can handle himself,\u201d Maren replied firmly. \u201cAnd our cook certainly knows how to wield a blade.\u201d She turned to Enoch, her expression stern. \u201cBut promise me this, lad\u2014if saving her proves too difficult, you come straight back to the <em>Waverunner.<\/em> We cannot spare either of you.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cYes, yes, of course,\u201d Enoch said quickly, already moving to where Felix and Gideon were lowering the boat. He checked that the silver-edged dagger was secure at his hip. Its weight felt comforting.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Celeste put a hand on his arm. \u201cBe careful,\u201d she said quietly. \u201cWhatever\u2019s down there, it\u2019s powerful.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cRight,\u201d said Enoch. The concern in her eyes surprised him.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The small boat hit the water with a splash. Enoch swiftly climbed down the rope ladder and took up position at the bow, while Marcus took the oars.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cReady, lad?\u201d&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cReady.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The sea grew treacherous almost as soon as they pulled away. The choppy waves pushed relentlessly against their small boat, as if trying to turn them back. Salt spray stung Enoch\u2019s eyes as the roar of the surf grew ever louder in his ears. Marcus steadily worked the oars, though, and Enoch did his best to smooth the seas in front of them with his magic. Gradually, they drew up to the cliff.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cThere,\u201d said Enoch, pointing to a small ledge a short distance from the rock where the girl was chained. The breakers were not so treacherous there.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">As they drew closer, Enoch got his first clear look at her. The wind whipped her long black hair around her face, while the salty spray gave her skin an alluring sheen. She had an athletic form that exuded a primal, feminine strength. But though she was bare, she seemed utterly heedless of her own nakedness. Indeed, she met his gaze and held it without flinching.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cHello!\u201d he called out to her. \u201cWe\u2019re here to help you!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Her dark eyes watched him warily. She gave no answer, but seemed almost resigned to her fate. Marcus grunted as he strained against the breakers.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cThe tide\u2019s rising, lad. Best be quick about\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">A deep, rumbling sound from behind them cut him off. The boat rocked violently, and not just from the waves.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWhat was that?\u201d Enoch asked. Marcus\u2019s face went pale.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cI think we just found what Celeste was worried about.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch followed his gaze and felt his blood run cold. A massive dark shape lurked just beneath the water, not a stone\u2019s throw away. He remembered his promise, but how could they turn around now? After all, they were so close.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cKeep going,\u201d Enoch shouted. \u201cGet us over to that ledge!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">With a powerful stroke of his arms, Marcus drove them through the next swell and over the breakers. The boat lurched and dropped, and the salt spray soaked them both. Enoch quickly cast a spell of calming to prevent them from being dashed on the rocks, and leaped out the moment they reached the ledge. He stumbled, nearly falling, before regaining his balance and running straight up to the girl.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWe\u2019re here to save you,\u201d he yelled. \u201cDo you understand me?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">She answered in her own tongue, a musical stream of syllables that were beyond his comprehension. Whatever her native tongue, it wasn\u2019t any language he knew.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch turned his attention to her bonds. The manacles around her wrists and ankles were fashioned out of thick iron, the chains anchored so solidly into the rock that Enoch had no hope of breaking them out\u2014not even with his magic. He examined the manacles more closely, and saw something that made him frown. A narrow gold thread ran through each one.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cAre you a mage?\u201d he asked.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The girl spoke again, gesturing with her eyes to the sea. The urgency in her tone made clear what words did not. Still, Enoch couldn\u2019t help but notice that the chains had been anchored to these rocks for a very long time. This girl was not the first victim to be bound here.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cMarcus,\u201d he called, \u201cI think this girl is supposed to be some sort of sacrifice.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cCan you break her loose?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch examined the locking mechanism of the bonds. To his surprise, the keyholes were rusted solid, and the mechanisms had all been gutted. Instead, the manacles were tied crudely shut with some sort of fibrous rope.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><em>Why did they do that?<\/em> he couldn\u2019t help but wonder. It was almost as if the people who had chained the girl hadn\u2019t been the ones who built them. That would explain why the iron was so cankered with rust. On the positive side, that meant\u2014<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">A low rumble from the sea behind him interrupted his thoughts. The water all around them began to churn and boil as an inky black shadow sped to the surface.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cLook out!\u201d Marcus shouted.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Half a dozen massive red tentacles burst from the churning sea, moving toward the girl at the rocks. Without thinking, Enoch drew his dagger and lunged. The blade bit into the rubbery flesh, sending a spray of black ichor across the rocks.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWhat is that thing?\u201d Enoch gasped.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cA Kraken, lad!\u201d Marcus shouted. A massive head broke the surface, with bulging lidless eyes and an enormous gnashing beak. More tentacles swung up all around them, turning the sea into a writhing mass.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The girl did not shriek in terror. Instead, she kept her eyes on Enoch, gesturing frantically for him to break her free. As Marcus moved to cover them, wielding a massive butcher\u2019s knife to keep the beast at bay, Enoch turned and began to work at the girl\u2019s bonds.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The rope was surprisingly difficult to cut through. He worked on her wrists first. The girl held still, as if knowing that any struggle would only make it take longer.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">At last, he cut through the first one, and the manacles fell away. She quickly grabbed a rock and smashed it against one of the grasping tentacles before it wrapped around Enoch\u2019s neck. Channeling his magic, he pressed the silver blade against the remaining bond, heating it enough to make it burn. The rope was soaked with seawater, but he soon managed to burn through it, releasing the second set of manacles.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cEnoch!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch turned, brandishing his dagger, and thrust out just as a tentacle began to wrap around his waist. Black ichor washed over his clothes and skin, and he barely managed to slip out of the kraken\u2019s grasp. He glanced over his shoulder at the girl, fearing the worst.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">To his surprise, she was bent over, grasping the manacles around both her ankles. Her eyes rolled back, and her hands glowed as she channeled her own magic to burn through the bonds. The chains fell away, and she leaped sideways just in time to avoid the beast.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cCome on!\u201d Enoch shouted \u201cTo the boat!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The three of them scrambled across the slippery ledge and leaped into the boat. Marcus seized the oars and propelled them through the crashing waves with desperate strength. At the bow, Enoch used his magic to part the breakers long enough to let them through.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">But the kraken was still behind them. A shout from the girl made him turn his head, just in time to see it slip back into the water to pursue them.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWinds and waves, heed my call,\u201d Enoch murmured. He thrust out with his magic, trying desperately to raise some protective wards.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The monster breached the surface, screeching as it reached for the boat with its enormous tentacles. Enoch felt his magic begin to falter, his strength nearly spent. But then, the woman raised her own hands. With her bindings removed, her power flowed freely. She joined her magic with his, and together they raised enough of a magical barrier to keep the monster at bay.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Marcus had fallen into a rhythm by now. With each stroke, he put more distance between them and the fearsome beast. Well behind them now, it thrashed in frustrated hunger, its wounds leaving a slick of inky blood on the churning waves as it finally sank back into the depths.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Safe now, Enoch slumped to the bottom of the boat in exhaustion. The girl remained on her feet, her back straight, her bearing proud.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWho are you?\u201d Enoch asked, blushing as he became acutely aware of her nakedness.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">She cocked her head inquisitively at him, but though there was clearly intelligence in her dark, almond eyes, she didn\u2019t understand a word.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWe\u2019ll find out soon enough, lad,\u201d Marcus grunted. \u201cOnly let the captain ask the questions. She\u2019ll know what to do.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cYeah,\u201d said Enoch, discreetly turning away. He considered offering her his shirt, but it was soaked and bloodied and torn. Instead, he fixed his gaze on the <em>Waverunner,<\/em> trying not to let his gaze wander to her lithe and supple form.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">At long last, they drew close enough for Felix to throw down the lines. Working quickly, they secured them to the little boat, the native girl watching them in curious fascination. A rope ladder came down next.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cCome on,\u201d said Enoch, motioning for her to follow. She hesitated only a moment before bounding up the ladder, as if it were no more difficult than walking along the beach. Enoch came up behind her, his cheeks reddening as he did his best to avoid the view. Soon, eager hands reached down from the deck, helping him aboard.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Captain Black strode over and offered the girl her cloak. \u201cHere, lass,\u201d she said, draping it over her bare shoulders.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The girl studied the captain\u2019s face with suspicious eyes. She accepted the cloak, though she seemed at best indifferent about preserving her own modesty.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cCan you tell us who you are?\u201d Captain Black asked, speaking slowly and distinctly. \u201cWhy were you chained to that rock?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The girl tilted her head, showing no sign that she understood. When she spoke, it was in the same musical language that Enoch had heard earlier.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cThat\u2019s no tongue I\u2019ve ever heard,\u201d Thaddeus muttered.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cNor I,\u201d said Gideon, stroking his pointed beard. \u201cAnd I\u2019ve seen more ports than most.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The woman spoke more forcefully, her frustration evident in her eyes. She pointed to herself, then to Enoch, speaking rapidly in her own tongue.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cThis is going nowhere,\u201d said Thaddeus. \u201cAre you sure it\u2019s a good idea to keep her? After all, this could be a trap.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cA trap?\u201d said Enoch, frowning. \u201cShe was chained to a rock and nearly eaten by a sea monster.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cI\u2019m not talking about her, boy. I\u2019m talking about the people who chained her there.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cI doubt this is some sort of trap,\u201d Maren mused. \u201cBut Thaddeus is right\u2014there\u2019s no sense keeping her if we can\u2019t find some way to talk. Which is a shame, since we really could use a guide around these parts.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch&#8217;s eyes widened as a thought suddenly struck him. \u201cCaptain\u2014I have something that might work.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cOh? And what would that be?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cMy mother\u2019s amulet. It\u2019s supposed to be able to translate languages. If we gave it to her, it might just work.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cIt\u2019s worth a try, at least. Go get it, lad.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch hurried to his small berth, pulling out his sea chest and working the lock to get it open. Inside, he dug through his spare clothes and other personal items until finally, his fingers closed around the smooth bronze spiral of the Whispering Shell.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Clutching it tightly, he hurried back to the main deck, where the crew were still gathered around the native girl. Her dark eyes darted warily from face to face.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cHere,\u201d said Enoch, handing her the amulet. \u201cThis will help.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">She shrank instinctively, hissing a little as she regarded the amulet with distrust.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cIt\u2019s alright,\u201d he told her. \u201cI promise it won\u2019t hurt you.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">When she didn\u2019t respond, he mimed putting it around his own neck, then gestured to her. After a long moment, she inclined her head slightly. He took a deep breath and slowly lifted the chain over her head, taking care not to startle her.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The amulet settled around her neck, gleaming a little against her olive skin. For a moment, nothing happened. Then the runes along the amulet began to glow with a soft blue light. With his magic, Enoch felt the enchantment come to life.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cCan you understand me?\u201d he asked.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Her eyes widened. \u201cYour words\u2026 they make sense to me now.\u201d She cautiously touched the amulet, holding it out to get a better look. \u201cThis shell speaks for you?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cIn a way,\u201d Enoch explained. \u201cIt translates whatever we say\u2014us to you, and you to us.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cRemarkable,\u201d Captain Black murmured. \u201cTruly remarkable.\u201d She turned to the native girl and smiled. \u201cWelcome to our ship, lass. I am Captain Maren Black of the <em>Waverunner,<\/em> a merchant vessel from Caravelia. This is Enoch, our sea mage. And who might you be?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cI am Kailani,\u201d she answered simply. Her sharp gaze swept across the crew, as if seeing them all for the first time. Captain Black coughed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cVery well, Kailani. Can you tell us why you were chained to that rock?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cThe western tribe captured me in a raid. Because they deemed me witch-born, they bound me as an offering to the Devourer.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cThe Devourer?\u201d Enoch asked curiously. Her tone was so casual, it was difficult to believe she was talking about life and death.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Kailani\u2019s eyes flicked back to him again. \u201cYes, the Devourer. Did you not know him? He nearly took us both. He feeds especially on the witch-born.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cSo the \u2018Devourer\u2019 is that sea beast?\u201d Black asked.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Kailani nodded.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cAnd the tribe that took you\u2014they deliberately fed you to it?\u201d&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cOf course,\u201d Kailani answered. \u201cIt is the way of all our people. The sea gives life; the sea demands payment. Of course, we do not sacrifice our own. Those of our enemies who fall into our hands, those are the ones we offer.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch frowned. \u201cBut\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cI was slated to die. By iron and by gold, I was bound to the very edge of the sea. But you changed my fate. You broke my bonds and drew silver against the Devourer. By your hands, I now live.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The fervor with which she spoke made Enoch profoundly uncomfortable. He glanced uneasily at the rest of the crew, all of whom were watching the exchange with interest.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cIt\u2019s, er\u2026 it\u2019s not that big of a deal,\u201d he stammered. \u201cAnyone would have done the same.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cNo,\u201d she said firmly. \u201cMany passed those rocks as the tide rose. No one stopped to save me. And why should they invite the vengeance of the beast?\u201d She stepped uncomfortably close to him, enough that he could see the flecks of gold in her dark eyes. \u201cOnly you risked the hungry waters. And now, by the laws of my people, I belong to you.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The <em>Waverunner<\/em> went very quiet. Enoch felt his face flush.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cI\u2026 what?\u201d&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cI am yours,\u201d Kailani repeated. \u201cYou are my master now, and I am your woman. Do with me as you will.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">She bowed her head and prostrated herself, Maren\u2019s cloak pooling around her. Enoch\u2019s heart suddenly began to race.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cThat\u2019s not\u2014I mean, I didn\u2019t mean to\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cIt is our way,\u201d she insisted, her firm tone a sharp contrast to her subservience. \u201cWhosoever saves a life claims it as his own. You broke my chains. You claimed me from the Devourer. This makes me yours.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">From the corner of his eye, Enoch saw the other members of the crew reacting with various degrees of amusement. Gideon smirked openly, while Celeste had gone very still, her expression unreadable.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cGet up,\u201d he said quietly. \u201cJust\u2014please, Kailani, get up.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">She rose to her feet immediately, in obedience to his command. But when her gaze locked onto his, it was so intense that he immediately turned away.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWe don\u2019t\u2026 we don\u2019t believe in owning people,\u201d he tried to explain to her. \u201cThat just\u2014that\u2019s not how things work for us.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cBut then who will protect me? Who will decide my fate?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cWe decide our own fates.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Kailani laughed. \u201cEven your women?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cEspecially our women,\u201d Captain Black interjected dryly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Kailani turned to regard her curiously before settling on Enoch again. \u201cMy body is young and strong, and I am skilled with net and spear. I will bear you many strong children. What more could a man want in a woman?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Enoch blush deepened to a burning crimson. He opened his mouth, but words failed him. All he could do was glance awkwardly from the captain to each of his crewmates.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">What was he supposed to do?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I had a lot of fun with this chapter! It introduces the rival love interest for Celeste, the female main viewpoint character, right after the chapter that introduces her male counterpart&#8217;s rival love interest. The midday sun shone honey-thick, making sweat run down the back of Enoch\u2019s neck. 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