{"id":153,"date":"2008-02-04T01:21:46","date_gmt":"2008-02-04T08:21:46","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=153"},"modified":"2008-02-04T01:21:46","modified_gmt":"2008-02-04T08:21:46","slug":"just-coming-out-of-a-writing-binge","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/just-coming-out-of-a-writing-binge\/","title":{"rendered":"Just coming out of a writing binge"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Yeah, that&#8217;s right.\u00a0 Somewhere on the order of 4,000 words in the last 48 hours&#8230;<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p>Blegh.<\/p>\n<p>I wish I were writing more in <em>The Lost Colony<\/em>.\u00a0 It seems that for every day I write 1,000+ words in that story, three days pass with me doing something else.\u00a0 I&#8217;m writing, usually&#8211;but in other stories.\u00a0 And when I do come back to that story, it&#8217;s hard to pick it back up.\u00a0 I need to finish it&#8230;just finish it&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>In fact, I think I&#8217;ll set a new goal to help with that: write at least SOMETHING in <em>The Lost Colony<\/em> each day.<\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, I&#8217;ve made good progress on <em>The Wormhole Paradigm<\/em>, that story I&#8217;m writing for English 318.\u00a0 It&#8217;s up to about 5,800 words now, from 2,000 before the weekend.\u00a0 Adding on the 1,000 words I wrote in <em>The Lost Colony<\/em> last night, and the final edits to <em>Decision LZ150207<\/em> yesterday&#8230;yeah, that&#8217;s a lot.\u00a0 Blegh.<\/p>\n<p>I spent a <em>lot <\/em>of time on <em>The Wormhole Paradigm<\/em> today, and I think I know how to fix what hasn&#8217;t been working.\u00a0 Basically, everyone has been saying that the characters aren&#8217;t strong enough.\u00a0 Honestly, my motivation for the story isn&#8217;t the characters, it&#8217;s the ideas and the setting behind all that.\u00a0 But, I guess I need to have good characters too.\u00a0 Phoiee.<\/p>\n<p>Well, here was my idea: make sure that each of the major characters has a weakness and a strength.\u00a0 The way the strengths and weaknesses play off of each other will develop the deeper parts of their characters.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve already done it, to a certain degree, with <em>The Lost Colony<\/em>.\u00a0 Ian has a strong sense of right and wrong and is a natural leader, but he lacks the self confidence to do much more than stay in the background.\u00a0 Leila is very independent, strong, and adventurous, but she&#8217;s also very naive.\u00a0 Saeed is extremely loyal towards his friends, but sometimes he relies too much on blind faith.\u00a0 Aaron is a mechanical genius, but he&#8217;s also very xenophobic.\u00a0 David wants to protect his people, but he&#8217;s also ambitious and resorts to violence too quickly.\u00a0 Elijah is very wise and learned, but&#8230;well, maybe I need to come up with a weakness for him.<\/p>\n<p>Now that I&#8217;ve come up with this idea, it means I&#8217;ll have to rethink the characters in <em>The Wormhole Paradigm<\/em> and probably rewrite what I&#8217;ve got already, but whatever.\u00a0 That can wait for the rewrite(s).\u00a0 And if the guys in 318 have a problem with that, they can bite me.\u00a0 Rehashing an unfinished draft over and over will not help this story progress.<\/p>\n<p>Speaking of which, I think I have a solution to one of the problems I&#8217;ve had with the 318 group: I&#8217;ll just be sure to write ahead of what I&#8217;m actually submitting to the writing group.\u00a0 That way, I think I&#8217;ll have less of an urge to just rewrite everything that the writing group critiques, since my mind will be a couple of thousand words ahead.<\/p>\n<p>Oh, and one last thing.\u00a0 I submitted <em>Decision LZ150207<\/em> to the Writers of the Future contest yesterday!\u00a0 Yay!\u00a0 Now we&#8217;ll wait and see what happens.\u00a0 I&#8217;m not really expecting to win, but at least a rejection slip will give me license to submit it elsewhere.\u00a0 And I do think that it can get published eventually.\u00a0 That&#8217;s the goal.<\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, life is overtaking me.\u00a0 Blehg!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Yeah, that&#8217;s right.\u00a0 Somewhere on the order of 4,000 words in the last 48 hours&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[],"tags":[4],"class_list":["post-153","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","tag-the-lost-colony","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-2t","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/153","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=153"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/153\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=153"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=153"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=153"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}