{"id":1504,"date":"2009-12-31T22:18:13","date_gmt":"2010-01-01T05:18:13","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=1504"},"modified":"2010-01-01T15:57:33","modified_gmt":"2010-01-01T20:57:33","slug":"bringing-stella-home-2-0-is-finished","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/bringing-stella-home-2-0-is-finished\/","title":{"rendered":"Bringing Stella Home 2.0 is finished!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Just in time for the new year, too! \u00a0I finished it at approximately 11:25 pm on New Year&#8217;s eve 2010. \u00a0Here&#8217;s the breakdown:<\/p>\n<p><strong>ms pages:<\/strong> 491<br \/>\n<strong>words: <\/strong>136,095<br \/>\n<strong>file size: <\/strong>1,869 KB<br \/>\n<strong>chapters: <\/strong>30<br \/>\n<strong>start date: <\/strong>14 July 2009<br \/>\n<strong>end date: <\/strong>31 December 2009<\/p>\n<p>And the wordle image:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.wordle.net\/show\/wrdl\/1496401\/Bringing_Stella_Home_2.0\" title=\"Wordle: Bringing Stella Home 2.0\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/www.wordle.net\/thumb\/wrdl\/1496401\/Bringing_Stella_Home_2.0\" alt=\"Wordle: Bringing Stella Home 2.0\" style=\"padding:4px;border:1px solid #ddd\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m glad to have it finished.  It&#8217;s got tons of issues with it&#8211;way too many for me to show it to an agent\/editor&#8211;but I think this draft is significantly better than the first one.  In particular, I&#8217;ve worked on improving the chapter structure: making sure that each chapter has consistent rising action, a central focus, a climax that develops the main story in some way, and compelling transitions that propel the reader into the next chapter.  I don&#8217;t do any of that very well in first drafts.<\/p>\n<p>So now that the second draft is finished, time to lay it aside for a while and work on something else.  After a few months, I&#8217;ll be in a better position to pick it up and fix the major issues.  <\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, on to something <strong>new<\/strong>&#8211;in more ways than one!  <\/p>\n<p>Happy new year!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Just in time for the new year, too! \u00a0I finished it at approximately 11:25 pm on New Year&#8217;s eve 2010. \u00a0Here&#8217;s the breakdown: ms pages: 491 words: 136,095 file size: 1,869 KB chapters: 30 start date: 14 July 2009 end date: 31 December 2009 And the wordle image: I&#8217;m glad to have it finished. It&#8217;s&hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/bringing-stella-home-2-0-is-finished\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Bringing Stella Home 2.0 is finished!<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[68],"tags":[223,158,156,186,347,63,204,103],"class_list":["post-1504","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-bsh","tag-finishing","tag-first-readers","tag-revising","tag-submitting","tag-untitled-odyssey","tag-triumphs","tag-wordle","tag-writing-chapters","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-og","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1504","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1504"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1504\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1508,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1504\/revisions\/1508"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1504"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1504"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1504"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}