{"id":132,"date":"2008-01-18T04:18:21","date_gmt":"2008-01-18T10:18:21","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=132"},"modified":"2008-01-18T18:48:04","modified_gmt":"2008-01-19T00:48:04","slug":"yay-and-simultaneously-uh-oh","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/yay-and-simultaneously-uh-oh\/","title":{"rendered":"Yay!  And, simultaneously, uh oh!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>So, I wrote 1,181 words in the novel today, just by focusing on it and getting it done, and I was really satisfied with the result!  The more days I have like this, the more confident I am that this novel is working out well and that it might not completely suck by the time I finish it.  However, I heard a piece of advice from Sanderson today in English 318 that made me think that I might be digging myself into a mess&#8230;<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p>The advice he gave was &#8220;for your first or second novel, don&#8217;t write more than two viewpoint characters at the most!&#8221; He was pretty adamant about this, too.  Unfortunately, in Lost Colony I have about four viewpoint characters, possibly more.  I was thinking about introducing a couple more in the second half of the book, but I might scratch that idea because it&#8217;s already pretty complicated.<\/p>\n<p>The thing is, I don&#8217;t think this story would be as good if it were from just one or two characters&#8217; POV.  The premise of the story is basically a clash of cultures, and different peoples&#8217; interpretations of the same events are really key, to the plot, the setting, and understanding the characters.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t think that he gave that piece of advice because he thinks that stories with multiple viewpoint characters are bad; I think he gave it because he doesn&#8217;t think we&#8217;re ready to handle it.  And he might be right.  I might not have the skills to polish up this story and make it really awesome at this time.  It&#8217;s a little bit scary to think that, but I favor realism over idealism.<\/p>\n<p>However, as I think about it, that doesn&#8217;t mean that everything is lost.  Not at all.  I can finish the rough draft now, maybe do a first rewrite, give it some time, work on some other projects, then come back to it and fix it when I do have the necessary skills.  So even if I can&#8217;t do the multiple viewpoints very well at this time, I can finish the rough draft and let the project simmer for a while.  That&#8217;s actually fairly encouraging to me.<\/p>\n<p>This new goal of 1,000 words per night is pretty tough, but I did it tonight in a little under two hours!  Went over to my friend Steve&#8217;s house, and despite the fact that all kinds of people were coming in and out of the room where I was writing (and despite the fact that yes, I was social and did interact with them) I exceeded the word count goal and finished this one scene, ready to move onto the next one.  It was VERY satisfying to tackle this one scene that I&#8217;d been doubting for a while and, in a couple of hours, make it work and finish it.  You&#8217;ve just gotta <em>write<\/em>, man.<\/p>\n<p>So that&#8217;s my update for now.  Don&#8217;t worry&#8211;I&#8217;ll write more about this week&#8217;s 318 class and Brandon Sanderson&#8217;s lesson on a future post!  Not only that, but there are a few other things I&#8217;d like to post on.  I&#8217;d like to dedicate a post to each of my main characters, explaining them a little, and I also need to review <em>Neuromancer<\/em> by William Gibson.  Man, that was an <em>amazing<\/em> book!  And, pretty soon, I&#8217;ll be finishing <em>Old Man&#8217;s War<\/em> and <em>Red Mars<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Just gotta keep blogging!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So, I wrote 1,181 words in the novel today, just by focusing on it and getting it done, and I was really satisfied with the result! The more days I have like this, the more confident I am that this novel is working out well and that it might not completely suck by the time&hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/yay-and-simultaneously-uh-oh\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Yay!  And, simultaneously, uh oh!<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[],"tags":[4,599],"class_list":["post-132","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","tag-the-lost-colony","tag-thoughts-reflections","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-28","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/132","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=132"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/132\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=132"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=132"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=132"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}