{"id":11067,"date":"2017-05-30T10:00:00","date_gmt":"2017-05-30T15:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/?p=11067"},"modified":"2017-05-30T00:17:56","modified_gmt":"2017-05-30T05:17:56","slug":"end-of-may-update","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/end-of-may-update\/","title":{"rendered":"End of May update"},"content":{"rendered":"

So it’s the end of\u00a0another month, and I’m happy to report that things are going well.\u00a0Gunslinger to the Stars<\/strong> has had a decent release, and\u00a0seems to be on its way to grow into its\u00a0natural readership. I don’t want to push it too hard just yet, better to wait until a few reviews and also boughts come in. But I can push the short story,\u00a0“Jane Carter of Earth and the Rescue that Never Was.”<\/strong> Will be interesting to see whether that garners interest in the novel.<\/p>\n

On the writing front, I’m making good progress on\u00a0Patriots in Retreat,<\/strong> my current\u00a0WIP. The plan is to finish the last four\u00a0Sons of the Starfarers<\/strong> books in quick succession, in order to release them one after another in the beginning of 2018. The covers are all done, and the editing shouldn’t be too expensive, so if I can knock all these books off over the summer, I’ll be in good\u00a0shape.<\/p>\n

The goal is to write each one of them in four weeks, with a week-long buffer between each draft. I’m trying out a new writing\u00a0method\u2014actually, a method I used to use\u00a0when I was a kid but laid aside when I wrote my first novel. Instead of writing several distinct drafts, I’m cycling through the previous day’s work in order to produce a more clean first draft.<\/p>\n

When I wrote my first novel, the goal was just to finish the thing, so instead of trying to fix all the problems with it as I went along, I prioritized getting to the end. Needless to say, that hot mess of a novel will never see the light of day. But for some reason, I’ve stuck with that method of writing ever since, sometimes to great detriment.\u00a0Heart of the Nebula<\/strong> took several years to\u00a0complete because the first two drafts were full of plot holes, worldbuilding inconsistencies, and totally useless characters.<\/p>\n

Of course, back then I was a much less experienced writer and needed some emotional distance in order to figure out how to fix my own work. But now, I think I’ve got a pretty good handle of it. So we’ll try out the cycling thing with these books and see how it goes.<\/p>\n

I did recently reread the first book,\u00a0Brothers in Exile.<\/strong> Have to say, it’s not my best work. Not that the story itself is bad, but the writing\u00a0is pretty poor and needs a good polish. Also, some of the character reactions are off. There’s a bit more melodrama than I’d like, and not enough consistency.<\/p>\n

Again, nothing in need of a complete overhaul. Just a touch up. And maybe this is more just a recognition of how much my writing has improved over the last couple of years (at least, I hope that’s what it is). But once the last four books are done, I plan to take a couple of weeks to really touch it up.<\/p>\n

In other news,\u00a0The Sword Keeper,<\/strong> my first fantasy novel, is just about finished and\u00a0on track for a September release. There’s a couple of issues my first readers have pointed out, but it’s more a question of patching the sails than\u00a0bringing her into drydock and building a new hull. The next big step after sending it off to the editor is to find a good cover artist. I’ll probably post a classified on Deviantart, see who bites.<\/p>\n

I really want an illustrated cover, not one of these photo-realistic things that all tend to blend together (or worse, copy the same stock photos). Those do tend to be a bit more expensive, but for my first fantasy novel, I’m willing to pay a little more.<\/p>\n

On the publishing side of things, I’ve got a short story single and a short story bundle lined up for June. It didn’t seem fair to release the one story as a single only to release it a couple months later in a bundle, so I’m doing them both together. The cover\u00a0is pretty spiffy\u2014I’ll be sure to do a reveal later this week.<\/p>\n

And that just about does it. Lots of things to do on the publishing side, lots of stories\u00a0to write on the writing side, but it’s all coming together and I think you’ll really enjoy how it turns out. Take care!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

So it’s the end of\u00a0another month, and I’m happy to report that things are going well.\u00a0Gunslinger to the Stars has had a decent release, and\u00a0seems to be on its way to grow into its\u00a0natural readership. I don’t want to push it too hard just yet, better to wait until a few reviews and also boughts… Continue reading End of May update<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"aside","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[1070,1071,862,1002,1080,1019,855,650,932,1072],"tags":[371,155,512],"class_list":["post-11067","post","type-post","status-publish","format-aside","hentry","category-ssf-vii","category-ssf-viii","category-ssf-i","category-gunslinger-to-the-stars","category-gunslinger-trilogy","category-ssf-vi","category-ssf","category-sk","category-twelfth-sword-trilogy","category-ssf-ix","tag-creative-process","tag-rough-drafts","tag-writing-craft","post_format-post-format-aside","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p7iXK-2Sv","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/11067","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=11067"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/11067\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":11069,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/11067\/revisions\/11069"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=11067"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=11067"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onelowerlight.com\/writing\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=11067"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}