So I got back to the States last night, after about forty six hours of travel (and only four or five hours of sleep).  It’s good to be back, but I’m already missing Georgia and thinking about all the things I’ll do once I get back.

The weirdest thing about being back home so far is how non-stressful traveling is.  I got to JFK, turned on my American cell phone and found out that the sim card is no longer recognized.  My train ticket needed to be rescheduled, I didn’t know who was picking me up back home or when, didn’t know the New York subway system all that well…and yet instead of freaking out, I just shrugged and figured I’d solve all that later.  Sure enough, Penn Station had wifi, so I instant messaged my brother in law and had him call my mom and work it out.

The lack of beggars in New York City was kind of strange.  There was one kid on the Subway who announced (after apologizing for taking people’s time) that he was trying to make money by selling M&Ms, so I helped him out and bought one.  In Tbilisi, some ten year old gypsy kid would fall on her knees and give a huge sob story, then walk through the car with her tin can (and would get more money from it than this kid did in New York).

So that was the first thing I ate when I got here.  The second thing was a Jamba Juice.  Next was a slice of American pizza–so much better than the stuff in Georgia–and then a bottle of root beer.  Man, the soda over here is so disgustingly sweet!  I was wide awake until the sugar hit my system, and then it was like taking a sledgehammer to the face.

I’m doing pretty well now, even though I woke up at about 3:30 and didn’t really go back to sleep. There’s not much happening this week, so I should be able to get over the jetlag fairly easily.

As far as Star Wanderers goes, I finished everything but the last scene and the epilogue, so I’ll wrap those up today and get ready to publish Part I.  The last few chapters aren’t as awesome as I’d like them to be, but I should be able to work those out in subsequent drafts.

In other news, I recently did an interview on Scifinerdsare.us.  It’s more geared towards writers than readers, but worth checking out.  There seems to be a lot of polarization these days between writers who self publish and writers who follow the more traditional path, which is unfortunate.  That said, indie publishing is definitely the best thing career-wise that’s happened to me.

Finally, I just watched a fascinating lecture by Douglas Rushkoff on the Occupy movement and a new cultural phase that he terms “presentism.” The most interesting thing for me is what he has to say about the way our democracy is evolving–basically, it’s becoming a little  more like The Colony from Bringing Stella Home.  So many story ideas to play with…

So I just got back from Racha this afternoon.  It was a lot of fun!  Saw Ambrolauri, Oni, and Shovi, only 20 km from the Russian border near Ossetia.  Don’t worry, though, we were safe the whole time–though the home we stayed at had a wolf pelt hanging in the dining room!

This video should give you a pretty good idea what Racha is like.  It’s part of a new ad campaign, and it does a good job capturing the feel of rural life in the region, as well as the blend of modern and traditional that you find throughout Georgia.  The music is a combination of two famous Rachuli songs.

I went with a fellow TLG teacher from Slovakia named Tomas, and together we made a really good travel team.  We met last week on the TLG excursion to Kakheti and hit it off right away, probably because I’m a quarter Czech.  He speaks a bit of Russian, and I speak a bit of Georgian, so between the two of us we were able to manage quite well.

A rickety old bus crawling up the treacherous road from Kutaisi to Ambrolauri.

The Rioni river near the Racha-Imereti border.

We took the Kutaisi-Ambrolauri bus up along the Rioni river.  The road hasn’t been repaved since Soviet times, so it was quite treacherous, especially in places where the cliff had partially eroded. Spectacular views, though, especially once we crossed the border into Racha.

At Ambrolauri, we got out and hitched a ride to Oni.  The local police actually flagged down a passing tour bus full of Israelis and had them take us.  It was awkward at first, until we made friends with the guide–a veteran hitchhiker who has been everywhere from New Zealand to Mongolia to Turkey.  When traveling to a country with a foreign language, the five phrases she always tries to learn are:

  1. Please.
  2. Thank you.
  3. Hello.
  4. I want.
  5. I need.

Pretty sound advice.  The numbers should come pretty soon after that, along with “how much” and “what price.” “No” is definitely important too.

Oni, a beautiful Georgian town nestled inside the Caucasus Mountains.

At Oni, we spent a couple of hours shopping around the local homestays before settling on Family Hostel, a bed-and-breakfast type place with some really nice accommodations.  It was a little pricier than we were hoping, but was definitely worth it.  The food was great, and the dad showed us a bunch of interesting sites the next day.

The Rioni headwaters, up near Shovi. Russian North Ossetia lies on the other side of that mountain.

One of many mineral water springs in Racha.

We headed up to Shovi with another tourist from the hotel: an 80 year old Turkish man named Adnan.  He’s a big time hiker/trekker, and showed us a bunch of photos from his hike up Mount Ararat. He also made us Turkish coffee when we stopped for lunch up in the forest.

Shovi is an awesome rustic resort way up near the Russian border.  It’s on the other side of Mount Shota, which is about as high and as steep as Mount Timpanogos in Utah.  Maybe I’ll come back and hike it sometime.  Anyways, Shovi was pretty cool–definitely worth coming back for a camping trip, or perhaps for a couple of nights in the cabins.

The most interesting thing, though, was how many springs were in the region.  Seriously, we stopped almost half a dozen times at places just like the one pictured above, with so much water bubbling up that it almost seems like someone forgot to turn off the faucet.  It’s all natural, though, and comes out carbonated and infused with all sorts of minerals.  Tastes just like the sparkling mineral water from Borjomi or Nabeghlavi–the locals come up quite frequently to refill their jugs and bottles with the stuff.  You can drink it straight from the spring, without any need for purification.

Back at Oni, we had a fun time hanging out with the family and seeing the dad’s furniture-making shop.  They’re good people, and we were really fortunate to find them.  Showed them some photos of my family, and by the end, I think the mom had half a mind to set me up with a Georgian girl. To be honest, the longer I stay in this country, the more inclined I am to accept…

The next day, we took off with the 19 year-old son on the bus to Tbilisi.  He was heading out for his final exams–he’s hoping to study law and tourism, to come back and help the family business.  We came down past Shaori Lake through Tkbuli.  One of the back tires blew out near the Kutaisi-Tbilisi road, but we made it out in one piece. Tomas continued up toward Zestaponi, while I got out to catch a bus heading back to Kutaisi.

Four months ago, I would have felt totally lost, but I’ve been around Georgia so much by now that it was a piece of cake.  Went into town for some lunch, then came back for a much-needed shower.

So that was the trip!  It was amazing–I definitely recommend heading up that way for anyone who has a chance.  There’s a lot of beautiful country up this way, as well as some genuinely good people.  The best sights in Georgia can be a little hidden, and Racha is full of them.

So I finally got an email from the Writers of the Future contest.  It reads:

Dear Entrant,

Your story has now been judged and did not win or place in the 1st quarter. Even though you have never had to wait for results in order to submit for the next quarter, this hopefully gives you incentive to submit again. The more often you enter, the better chance you have of winning, and improving  your skills.

I do urge you to join our forum if you have not already, or subscribe to our judge, David Farland’s newsletter. Lots of great tips at both locations to help you.

I do hope you are already working on that next story and do let me know that you did get this e-mail.

Best regards,

Joni Labaqui

I’m not going to lie: it’s a pretty disappointing way to end an 8+ month wait.  But when you’re a writer, rejection is just a normal part of the business.  I was hoping to get at least an honorable mention, but oh well.

Stories are fundamentally subjective: what might work really well for one reader might not for another.   The important thing is to write the best stories that you can, and to send them out into the world until they grow into their audience.  I still feel confident that Star Wanderers represents some of my best work to date, so I plan to make it available as soon as I can.

I’m flying back to the States on Friday, but Part I is already edited and formatted, so I’ll probably publish it over the weekend.  In the meantime, I’ll finish the first draft of the complete novel somewhere between Tbilisi and New York.  That’s one good thing about the long wait–it helped me to finish the story and work out some of the kinks before publishing it.

So yeah, the WOTF rejection is a bit of a setback, but at the same time, it’s also quite liberating.  All I really wanted was to get this story out to the readers, and now I can finally do that!  If you like my other stories, I think this is one you’re really going to enjoy.

Expect to hear more about it soon!

So I think I’ve clocked in about 1,000 kilometers this past week, mostly between Kutaisi and Tbilisi.  Seen some interesting things, met a lot of interesting people, made some good memories, and thought a lot of deep and poignant thoughts.

Unfortunately, all this travel isn’t conducive to blogging.  I’ve got five days before I fly back to the States, and updates are probably going to be sparse until then.  If you were wondering what happened to the Trope Tuesday posts, don’t worry, I plan to get back to them (and hopefully pulling in some guest bloggers) after this week.

Tomorrow, I’ll head out to Racha, one of the more remote areas in Georgia.  It should be interesting.  Here’s a video with some photos of the region (and traditional music):

I have no idea what we’ll find there, but it’s definitely going to be an adventure.

As far as the writing goes, I’ll probably finish Star Wanderers somewhere between here and New York City, and publish part I in July after I’m a little more settled.  Didn’t finish it this weekend, but I’m only two scenes and an epilogue from the end, so if all else fails I’ll just finish it on the airplane.

As for the next project…you know, I’m not even going to try and look that far ahead.  I’ve got plenty of ideas tugging on my brain and I’m sure the next story will more or less write itself, so long as I don’t get in the way.  Instead, I’ll leave you with this:

It’s an interesting piece of Soviet-era art on the side of a factory in Zestaponi.  When I come back in September, I’ll have to do a post on all the crazy-cool Soviet-era stuff that’s still around.  The USA wasn’t the only country that made it into space–or even really the first!

See you on the other side!

So the finalists for the first quarter Writers of the Future have been announced, but there hasn’t been any word on semi-finalists or silver HMs and probably won’t be until the winners are announced.  I can’t really publish part I of Star Wanderers until I hear back, so that means more waiting.  Grrr…

In the meantime, I’ve been finishing up the rough draft of the full-length novel.  I’m currently on the last chapter, probably about 2k words from the end.  Maybe I’ll finish it tonight…who knows?  I’m currently in Tbilisi, traveling over the weekend, but I’ll see what I can do.

This will be the seventh novel I’ve completed, including one that I trunked and two that I haven’t published yet.  There’s a weird sort of feeling when you get to this stage, like coming to a turning point in your life as one phase ends and another begins…it’s difficult to describe.  Since I really am at a turning point like that in my life, perhaps my view is a little bit biased, but I do feel like finishing this novel is having something of an influence.

I could ramble on for a while, but I think this is as good a place as any to stop.  Besides, I want to get some writing in.  I’ll leave you with this photograph:

This was when I knew I’d fallen in love with Georgia.

Taken today on the train ride from Kutaisi to Tbilisi.  These are the Lesser Caucasus Mountains…I’m not sure what the name of the river is here (there are maybe half a dozen of them) but the view is pretty awesome.  Seriously, it’s like a thickly forested version of Glenwood Canyon from the States.

Good stuff.  More on Georgia later–but first, I have a novel to write.

So the first quarter finalists for the Writers of the Future contest were finally announced (finally!), and I wasn’t among them.  Oh well.  But the good news is that I can move ahead now to publish part 1 of Star Wanderers!

First, though, I need to work out a killer blurb.  This is what I’ve got so far:

When Jeremiah arrived at Megiddo Station, all he wanted was to make some trades and resupply his starship. He never thought he’d come away from the frontier outpost with a wife.

Before he knows it, he’s back on his ship again, alone with his accidental bride. Since neither of them speak the same language, he has no way to tell her that there’s been a terrible mistake. And because of the deadly famine that has ravaged her home, there’s no going back either. The only way forward lies across a dozen parsecs of cold, empty space.

Jeremiah wasn’t looking for someone to keep him warm on the long voyages, and he certainly isn’t ready to settle down. He’s a star wanderer, roaming the Outworlds in search of his fortune. But there’s a dark side to his wandering–a loneliness that threatens to destroy him. His unexpected passenger may be willing to end that, but how can she when they barely understand each other?

So what do you think?  Does it tickle your fancy?  Are you intrigued to read more?  Or are you thinking it’s kind of “meh”?  Any feedback would be much appreciated, even if it’s just “this reminds me of _____.”

By the way, here’s the cover:

I’m experimenting a lot with this next novel.  The plan is to release it in a serial format first, then publish the full-length novel once I’ve serialized the sequel (more of a parallax actually.  The tentative title for that one is Star Home, and it’s the story from the girl’s perspective).

Here’s how I plan to publish it:

  1. Release Part I for $2.99.
  2. Give newsletter subscribers a two week coupon code on Smashwords to download Part I for free.
  3. Release Part II for $2.99 and drop Part I to free.
  4. Give newsletter subscribers a two week coupon code on Smashwords to download Part II for free.
  5. Release Part III for $2.99 and drop Part II to $.99.  Keep Part I at free.
  6. Give newsletter subscribers a two week coupon code on Smashwords to download Part III for free.
  7. Release Part IV for $2.99 and drop Part III to $.99.  Keep Part II at $.99 and Part I at free.
  8. Give newsletter subscribers a two week coupon code on Smashwords to download Part IV for free.
  9. Publish the full-length novel  at $4.95.

This way, no one has to pay more than five bucks for the whole thing, and people who subscribe to the newsletter get a really sweet deal.  There shouldn’t be more than a month or two between release dates–Part II is almost ready to go, and I plan on finishing the complete first draft in the next couple of days.

So yeah, that’s the plan.  I’m excited to finally get this story out to you!  I really had a blast writing it, and I think you’ll enjoy reading it, especially if (like me!) you’re a fan of science fiction romance.

More to come!

I just had an awesome weekend.  Saw the most amazing cave complex of my life, toured Kakheti o a TLG excursion, met a bunch of really cool people, and hung out with them in Tbilisi for a while.  I’ll have to save all that for another blog post, though, probably in a couple of days.

Rumor has it that the judging was finished for the first quarter Writers of the Future contest over the weekend, and all the finalists were contacted.  I didn’t get a call or an email, so I’m probably not a finalist this time around.  Oh well.

In any case, I’m very much looking forward to getting the results so that I can finally publish this dang story!  It’s been way too long since I published anything, and while there have been reasons for that (moving to another country, starting a second career), I really need to be publishing new stuff more regularly.

Here’s what I want to publish before the end of the year:

  • First and second parts of Star Wanderers (my Writers of the Future story).  This is a novel I plan to publish in four parts, with each part being its own self-contained story.  I blogged about it a while ago…more on that later.
  • A companion novella to Desert Stars.  This is still just in the planning stages, but there’s plenty of backstory to draw from, and I really would like to revisit that corner of the Gaia Nova universe.
  • Either Heart of the Nebula or Stars of Blood and Glory.

That last one is going to be an ambitious undertaking, since both of them are still in the alpha-reading phases right now.  Also, I don’t now whether I’ll have regular access to a reliable source of electricity in the fall, which will further complicate things.  However, I do believe it’s possible to put out one or the other before the end of the year, though probably not both.

All of this is still up in the air, though, and I can’t promise anything except to get Star Wanderers: Part I up as soon as the results come in for the Writers of the Future contest.  It’s already formatted and ready to go, just need to fine tune the blurb and hit “publish.”

And of course, before I move on to any of these other projects, I have to finish the one I’m currently working on.  So so long!  I’m off to the library to write.

So today was the last day of school in Georgia, with all of the craziness that that entails.  It was kind of sad to say goodbye, even though I’ll probably be coming back to the same school in September.  In the meantime, I’m going to miss being a rockstar to all the 7-12 year olds and giving them high fives after class and in the hallways.

I haven’t posted much about my teaching experience, but it’s generally been positive, though not without its ups and downs.  I’ve met a lot of great people, taught a lot of great kids, and lived in a culture very different from my own.  I’m not sure how I’ve grown yet, or what I’ve learned from the experience, but it isn’t over–I’ll be back after the summer, for a least one more semester.

I asked to be placed in the same school again, though I’ll be changing homestay families.  If they can’t find another family in this district, I asked to be placed in a village near Kutaisi.  It’s impossible at this point to say what will happen, though, and things in this country tend to change without notice.

When I came to Georgia, my goals were to find out if I could balance teaching English with my writing career, to get some useful teaching experience, and to gain some cultural exposure that would enhance my writing.  On all three counts, I think I’ve had success.

My writing productivity has gone down  slightly since coming out here, but I think that has more to do with the homestay and finding a good, quiet place to write.  I’m still writing every day, just 1.5k words instead of 2.5k.  Teaching English isn’t the problem–in fact, it’s probably one of the best careers for aspiring writers, just so long as you know your creative process and have a modicum of self-discipline.  I’ll probably do another post on that later.

As far as teaching experience, I don’t know how much my time here in Georgia is going to help my resume, but it has helped me to have a bit more confidence when it comes to teaching.  I still feel like there’s a lot of room for professional improvement, though, and it’s going to be difficult to get that here.  I like Georgia, though, so I’ll be happy to come back.  If anything, I figure one year looks better on a resume than six months.

And as for cultural exposure, coming out here was definitely a good move.  Living in a developing country changes your perspective in a lot of interesting ways, and Georgia is so different from America that I’m sure I’ll be talking about it for years to come.  How all of this will affect my writing, I don’t exactly know, but I’m sure it will only enhance it.

So yeah, that’s been my experience so far.  The last day of school was kind of bittersweet, but I’m definitely looking forward to coming back!